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Is it wrong to think Cadence is best princess? Is it wrong to think Feather Bangs is best pony? I certainly don't think so.


(Spoilers from School Raze!)

Although the magic has returned to Equestria and Cozy Glow is locked inside Tartarus, everything should be back to normal. One friendship student felt really guilty about the recent events even though she had nothing to do with it. So she goes to the School of Friendship's guidance counselor to talk about her problems.

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You’d think at least ONE pony student would’ve been like, hey, wait a second THESE guys are stealing all magic? I don’t think so, Yona almost died because of it and what do any of them have to gain? Also you said that Starlight was away with Twilight, So why the BUCK is she stuck down here in a magical orb?

Good story though😊

And also, the students should have realized that a filly is being in charge. A filly; which is a foal; which is horse equivalent of children, in charge of an establishment of education. You'd think one would have noticed that something is wrong with that concept.

We can't even be sure anymore if Cozy Glow is a filly or a Munchkin.

This was an interesting one.

Though, is it bad that I wanted to see either Starlight’s or Twilight’s (or at least one of the teachers’) reaction to what all of the students did? (And not just one.) I mean, not outright anger or fury, just disappointment.

That could be an idea for a new fanfic.

It could go like this, Twilight calls every student for an assembly and she talks about the incident with Cozy. She and the staff could discuss their disappointment to their students about not jumping to conclusions just because a little filly says so. Twilight gives the students the options of continuing with their lessons but it will be more work or they could leave if they feel like they are not worthy of coming to the school.

Oooh! That sounds intriguing!

(But wait, didn’t Twi jump to conclusions in Marks for Effort?)

Yeah, which I really hoped she regretted. Honestly, that was one of the many reasons why I hated season 8.

Do you want to write the story with the plot I mentioned?

I could give it a shot. If so, do you want some credit for it? I could type: Suggestion given by BezierBallad. Or something like that.

You could. Thanks, buddy!

' That little brat ' Starlight thought before she continued to listen to Gloom.

Like I said I had some suspicious about that kid Ever since her first Appearances

' I would pay so much to see that .' Starlight chuckled.

oh trust me It was sort of a pay back for the bs he said

Yeah I really wish to see those kids to say they were sorry for even believing cozy and her lies I can't say that because there kids but they should see there something wrong About this Whole situation here And Hasbro or whoever's in charge kind of has a bad reputation Of forgetting the big obvious that they should have addressed about there actions

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