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Midnight Shadows
Been a member since 2012, never realized there was a bio line until the end of 2018, I TAKE WRITING COMMISSIONS! :D lol. I don't do roleplays.
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Won't read this story, as quite a few of the listed things in the trigger warning section I dislike, but thank you for being polite and pointing those things out in the description before I started reading and letting me know I might not enjoy this story. Thank you again!
9113689
Well, I try to be as transparent as possible with whats in my stories, nothing is worse than thinking you're going to like a story based on the description then getting in and being triggered by content because there wasn't a warning! I try to pride myself on tagging properly lol. Thank you for taking the time to leave the comment it really means a lot that me taking the time to type all that out is actually useful.
9113836
My man/girl (won't assume), thanks again for the warning. I just wish more writers did something like that...
9113843
Girl :) And Np!
9113844
Praise the kek!
Good story. Personally this kind of story isn’t my style. More into the diapers; and mind control is ok but I wasn’t the biggest fan of the other concepts.
However, I always read stories before I “judge” them and even though it wasn’t my style, the writing was very good and I liked the plot. Getting a power that not many if any others can use is something I enjoy a lot. All the characters were written really well and written “in character” despite the mane 6 being forced to do crazy things you’d never expect them to do (except maybe pinkie pie).
Keep up the good work! I plan on checking out any future stories you make.
9115330
Thanks! It means a lot!
Was expecting some real good kink stuff, ended up reading a sorta hot but mostly cute story that read like an episode of the series (although a perverted one at that). Also, the Spike gag at the end gave me a chuckle. You're a wonderful writer, great story!
9116780
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :)
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9116780
Thanks for the great feedback guys.
I don't see why Twilight would hug her. I think she would be really pissed off at DT manipulating her friends like that.
9126988
Well, we wanted to imply that while Twilight is mad, she's also forgiving and in reality no real harm was actually done... per say. XD
Plus, its also implied that Diamond Tiara gets a massive punishment but we didn't want to focus on that.
9127255
Indeed but you can also have that by having her glare and snapping but saying she will forgive DT, eventually.
9127331
Could have, perhaps. But I think its fine the way it is. Besides since this was a commission I'm not really looking for criticism on it.
9127555
Every story is a learning opportunity.
What I'm saying is that Twilight just seems to be a little too forgiving.
9127557
Yes, and you seem to comment on every single one of my stories and whine about how it's not done the way you would have done it and then get into an argument with me about it. While I do accept criticism with open arms, it kinda seems like to me that you're following me around and openly trying to argue with me in my comment sections passive aggressively and nitpicking over every little thing that I've done differently than you would have. I don't mean to sound rude but you've done this on multiple stories now across FA and here.
9127717
No, me doing that twice so quick after each other was just coincidence.
9127753
I mean, dude, it's pretty obvious you're chasing me across sites to tell me that I didn't do a story exactly the way you want it done even though you were in no way involved with the story or the commissioner. And i'm not the only person you've done this to, So stop. Tyvm.
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I really mean it. It was just a coincidence. I guess I shouldn't have commented on you stories so quickly after each other. I don't know what else to say about that other that I'm not chasing you and I just happen to read 2 stories of yours fairly close to each other.
Saying what you like in a story and what things you would have liked differently is what you post in comments isn't that right?
9129261
That is what comments are for, leaving feedback, however, the trend with your comments I've noticed has been getting into an argument with the author of the story because they didn't do it the way you wanted them to. I don't take kindly to that. Fair criticism is one thing, what you do is a bit different.
9129278
What else is criticism? It's saying that you think you know a way the story could be improved.
9129290
I'm not going to continue to argue, I'll just say this: The way you go about your criticism seems like you tend to want to argue with the writer, it's one thing to say your criticism and then be done, maybe a second thing, but you tend to just keep going and going on it. Like you're trying to force me to change the story. It wears people down. I'm not trying to be rude or dissuade you from criticizing, I'd just like it if after you made your point you didn't keep harping on it the way you do.
9129332
Okay. With those question I usually try to further understand what the writer is trying to go for. Making assumptions when I'm not sure has often gone over even worse than asking.
Also the arguing is partially because I just enjoy doing it. Discussing a story, it's plot points and how things can be improved.
I'll keep in mind to cut off the conversations sooner and to not do it to the same artist in rapid succession.
9129785
Yeah, admission that you enjoy arguing just kinda solidifies that you're deliberately trying to be an ass. Please don't argue with me on my stories.
9131190
Sorry, I know I should not respond to this but I don't like you saying I'm trying to be an ass. I'm mostly trying to get a better understanding. Like you are trying to write a story but you also enjoy the process of writing.