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Velvet's Very Fortunate Night 3

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Prismfire Productions

Prismfire Productions #1 · May 3rd, 2018 · 1 · 1 ·

Grammer, wrong tense, and the fast pace really take away from the premise... You should have asked for a prereader to help

Goldenstrings #2 · May 3rd, 2018 · 1 · ·

Nice

GrimmWolfDragon

GrimmWolfDragon #3 · May 6th, 2018 · · ·

Great chapter, so who's the next Target for Velvet's

GrimmWolfDragon

GrimmWolfDragon #4 · May 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

Great chapter.

fluttershyfan3030

fluttershyfan3030 #5 · Aug 11th, 2018 · 2 · ·

i think with all the sex chryssy and velvet have should lead one or both into pregnancy. great story

marinus18 #6 · Oct 28th, 2018 · · ·

Not bad at all. The point where Chrysalis transitioned from awkward to horny is not quite clear though.

OmniFox

OmniFox #7 · Nov 17th, 2018 · · 1 ·

I wonder if a griffin wants to join in?

D-Pyro C

D-Pyro C #8 · Mar 29th, 2019 · · 1 ·

Wonderful. Now we just need a zebra, a griffon, a hipppgriff, and a minotaur.

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