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MoonaKnight13


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Lol this was great, a nice paring we don't see often. I would love to see you do this as a series. Where it is different one of her friends and each one telling how they became Spike's first time and they are secretly dating. It will be funny seeing Shy confess she was was Spike's first time and she is having his kid, the same with Rarity oh man that would be too funny to see.

Rule? What rule?

I need a they really want to see a story where Spike turning the main 6 the Alcorn princesses and Sunset Shimmer and starlight into his own personal Sluts

Celestia is in for a surprise. An alicorn kirin surprise, that is.

I demand a sequel. Nuff said. :twilightsmile:

What if Celestia and Luna summoned and ordered Spike to legally rut mares or any female race?

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With Twilight getting more confused with each story, until she seen ed Spike and finds out he's been rutting all of them and fibbing about who was his first, since otherwise he'd have to come clean about his growing harem?

So good!
Pls keep the good work!

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I was thinking it wouldn't be tied together but more like a Anthology with each one being its own case. The way you described it made Spike lieing to each girl and using them for sex. I just think it would be interesting to see how it would be difference with each girl being his first and at the end having to confess to carrying his child. I think your way could work if this didn't feel such a emotional connection with Luna. Having him going around after that cheapen this story I would feel.

There won't be more chapters or sequels. I won't write Spike going around fucking every girl lying to them about them being his first time or something like that, I don't like harems nor Spike x Mane 6 or 8.

This is just a one shot thing and it forever will be.

Thank you for reading it and I'm glad you guys enjoyed it.

Just the tip?

This is my 3rd reed of this story, it's definitely worth a sequel.

Luna gently rubbed her belly. “Well…"

Oh boy, she's...welp, spike, you wasted 20 years of your life.

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Hmm, damn, I wish to be spike by then

I would love to see a continuation of this!

It was great and simple. Not too long, but to short either. Rather perfect for me. Keep it up.

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Would you mind if I wrote a continuation following up on Spike and Luna raising the foal?

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That's fine by me 👌

Wished we got some sort of sequel or so.
I just love Spike x Luna

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I would certainly read that if it comes out.

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