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Polaris Solarmoon


An author who's stories may not be good but at least he tries...

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Twilight Sparkle uses the Universe Swap spell once more but this time she accidentally puts herself in The Mixed View Universe! Now she has to get used to the unusual scenery until the spell wears off. That is if a certain draconasus doesn't mess with her...

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The "Mixed Universe"? Are there other stories set in this universe?

Dreadnought

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Not yet, but there will be some more soon.

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so the universe isn't done but I wish the same could be said for this story

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no it wasn't i just want more of it

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I have something special planned...

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weird saying incoming
that makes me happier then a brachyadios that found a fresh pile of mold

"Alternative Universes are very strange. Some are very similar to our home yet with minor changes while others have many changes. With this Universe Swap spell Glitter Brightstar taught me many moons ago. I have found out so much and yet so little at the exact same time. Just, what are alternative universes? And how are they made? I've yet to find that out but I'm not going to get too worried about it. I'll just try to explore another universe to see what it has in store for me. So that is why I am not here at the moment. "

Add a comma after the word 'home'.
Replace the full stop after the word 'ago' with a comma.

Put the letter in italics so it doesn't mix with the story.

"Can you stop looking at me like that!? I know I'm attractive and all but your just creepy." the Fluttershy look-alike said.

Change the word 'your' to 'you're'

"That's my name don't wear it out!" the creature said before laughing.

Add a comma after the word 'name'

"Oh, ok just cheacking thank you." Twilight says before fainting

Change the word 'cheacking' to 'checking'.
Add a comma after the word 'checking'

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Thank for the help, I went back and fixed those errors.

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Glitter Brightstar, she is from the story A Different View.

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