This story is a sequel to Sunset Spying
Samhain, now commonly known as Nightmare Night, is a time to celebrate normies and supernaturals coming together, the lines between the spirit world and the mortal world blurring.....and also for dressing up and getting free candy. Things go well at first....until a Nightmare Night prank goes horribly wrong and Canterlot High is accidentally turned into a real house of horrors!
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Hey there. Again, I have to say VERY good job on the start of this story. I LOVED the homage to the early years openings of the "Treehouse of Horrors" episodes of "the Simpsons" as well as the little "Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy" reference Rainbow made . Anyway, excellent work on the characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up in all the right places.
Plus, great Shout Outs/Mythology Gags concerning the costumes as well particularly concerning Bon-Bon's "secret agent" outfit .
I'm definitely going to be looking forward to seeing what you come up with for this story.
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I have no idea what those references mean but thank you!
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...Sounds like you had a VERY interesting high school experience!
Yeah, I've definitely got a really bad feeling about what's going to happen next, but a bad feeling that means I'm really curious concerning the effects of the spells and how the girls are going to fix things once they realize how badly they mess up . Indeed, a splendid job on the characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up. Well, here's looking forward to the next chapter.
Again, great job on the costume picks in addition to Twilight's reaction to her mother's costume as well as the characterizations, exchanges and future chapter set-up in all the right places. And, yeah, Pipsqueak's "Christmas Story" reference (I.e. "You'll put your eye out.") was some good comic relief considering what's probably going to end up happening next.
At any rate, yeah, I'm am definitely quite interesting in seeing where this is going.
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...actually that comment about the sword was taken from the card game. I just thought it would be a fun throw-in!
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Okay. Thanks for the reference correction.
Well, hey there. Thanks greatly for getting the next chapter up. It took a while (for very understandable reasons), but was well worth the wait.
And, yeah, Rainbow, you should NOT have let Trixie's heckling motivate you to do read further into that spellbook. You're already giving Twi a bad feeling.
At any rate, you did a VERY good job on the exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly like how Twilight is starting to get JUST Genre Savvy enough to mentally smack herself for trying to reason away her bad feelings.
Anyway, once again, I will most assuredly be looking forward to more of this.
Hey there. All I can say is, absolutely splendid job on the latest chapter. The exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places.
I particularly liked Luna's attempt to warn the girls that something bad was about to happen as well as the explanation of WHY the psychic warning can't detect SPECIFIC details.
And, yeah, now the girls are going to have to rescue Pip (and hopefully Rainbow gets an absolutely epic scolding [AND detention for a few weeks] for messing with that sort of black magic after the adventure is over).
Well, I, will, of course, be most certainly looking forward to more of the story.
Again, VERY good work on the latest chapter. The exchanges, action, characterizations and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked Rarity's reaction to finding out Rainbow read that spell and Luna's getting herself, Twilight and AJ into the school with that special teleportation spell .
I will most certainly be looking forward to more of this.
And I hope you and your family have a Happy Mother's Day.
Holy cow! It took a while, but was definitely worth the wait. The exchanges, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up are all well done in all the right places as usual. I particularly liked how quick Pinkie was to protect and try to comfort Pipsqueak as well as how Rainbow IS actually Genre Savvy enough to spot A COUPLE of horror movie clichés and Spike's attempt to try to help with the tracking once he was found to accidentally accompany Luna, Twilight and Applejack .
Yeah, I will most assuredly be looking forward to the next chapter (especially since we seem to be closing in on the climax).
Once more an excellent job on the action, exchanges, characterizations and future chapter set-up in all the right places concerning this chapter. I particularly liked the brief but WELL-deserved lecture Rainbow got concerning her casting the spell in the first place . And, yeah, the time limit before the spell becomes permanent AND the ghost getting the book before Luna could do the counter-spell definitely complicate things, but at least the group has a clear plan.
At any rate, here's looking forward to the climax.
Great job on the second-to-last chapter. The exchanges, action, characterizations, main adventure wrap-up and epilogue set-up are all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the ghost chase (especially Luna's contributions) as well as Luna's reactions to the unintentionally touchy subject Rainbow brought up and the close calls of the others .
I'm definitely going to be looking forward to the epilogue, ESPECIALLY to see how Rainbow is going to get punished for causing the mess in the first place.
Excellent work on the epilogue to this story. The exchanges, characterizations and wrap-up were all well done in all the right places. I particularly liked the discussion of Rainbow's punishment (actually pretty fair all things considered), as well as Celestia and Luna's chat on both the past and the probable future and the reveal of Spike's in-universe audience .
I'll most certainly be looking forward to seeing what you come up with next.
I see nothing going badly here...
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Also, we now require fan art of EQG Twilight Velvet Lara Croft... Because reasons.
On behalf of the Moon, I will right wrongs and triumph over evil - and that means you!
Are you sure this isn't just a friendship problem that'll be sorted out in about a half hour or so?
Twilight's mom has got it going on...
Taigh-uaisle roughly translates to the Gentleman's House.
Taigh an uamhas, The House of Horror.
Not to nitpick, but still love this series.
I'm not going to lie but both Twilights did look hot. Don't tell my wife.