Twilight (Sci) Sparkle enrolled into Canterlot Highschool not long after the Fall Formal incident.
On the surface, the school appears normal; but within these walls lies a dark secret of one student, 'Sunset Shimmer' whom disappeared after an unfortunate "accident".
No one dares speak of her name, in fear of incurring her wrath that still remains. Is this legend true? Or will Twilight prove there's no such thing as a demon?
Image by Shy-Debby
Inspiration by MOTI - Star
Featured 7-15-2023
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Chapters (1)
Howdy. If y'all need some tips on writin' in the Southern style, here's some fine an' dandy pointers.
Sounds such as 'I' are rendered phonetically as 'Ah'. Example: 'Ah sure am fixin' fer some competition!' This example also shows another example of this; 'or' tends to shift to 'er'. The same happens other 'Uh' sounds; in some parts of the South, 'Asia' is pronounced 'Ashur'.
All of this depends on what style of Southerner you're going for. AJ in EqG has more of an Ozarks mountain woman to her, whereas S1 AJ was much closer to a Southern Belle in the way she was portrayed.
spot the error, i did!
Ohhh, phantom Sunset to haunt them all! Awesome concept.
Great begin, I look forward to more of this.
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Thanks for the tip, still know I wont be great at doing any style of Southern Accent but any information and constructive criticism is appreciated.
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Found and fixed, my bad.
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Glad to hear and working on next chapter right now, hoping not to disappoint as I pour some horror elements in it.
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Never a problem.
This a wonderful idea.
I can't wait to see where is goes!
Typos aside, this has me intrigued. Now the question is how are they going to exorcise this specter of evil.
So she’s dead?
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Hmmm ... perhaps, IDK.
What I can say is things will get a "little" supernatural.
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Oh ok