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riicky83


Sunset Shimmer is my dream girl.

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male stallion

:facehoof:

It’s not considered rape if the mare is in heat. Plus, it is probably the safest way for a stallion to not be physically raped by a horny mare.

8819240
Actually, this is rape. If the creature is sapient, it's rape.

Normally i stay away from stuff like this but.... Im strangely fascinated by the concept alone.

How did they get banned? Theres stories with a lot worse stuff in them on the site.

8820347
I think it's because the chosen cover art was too saucy :twilightsheepish:

Welp Zecora is about to be in a world of trouble. I hope the girls will help Flutterheart out with his issues.

Wow that could not have help his fear of ponies

Well, that certainly went a direction I wasn't expecting. I'm curious to see what else he gets up to though :D

Well I can't wait to see what happens.

They looked at each other before nodding together, “if the bracelet tells him when we are alone then it shouldn’t be too bad” Rarity said.

when did he explain that to them?

“Yeah to be honest he scratched my itch pretty good.” Applejack said as she looked at the doll, Twilight scratched her chin. “Hm, I suppose it could be useful” she said. “The Elements of Harmony did put us in a sort of permanent heat”.

when did applejack admit that they did it I thought she whispered to him so that the others wouldn't know?

8832749
Read a little earlier and it'll say that Rarity read the notes so she knows about the bracelet.
As for the other part I did have it where the others would've guessed about it in their minds but it looks like that got edited.

8832769
I thought rarity read the first note and the second note talked about the bracelet?

Comment posted by Raccoon Writer deleted Apr 10th, 2018

Nothing like a bit of sexy Rarity action to brighten up your day.

Nice, sexy and fully enjoyable to read.

Cool, but also hot too.

Excellent fic bro, waiting eagerly for the next chapter :D

She carried on, moving her head down further, until she had all but swallowed the entirety of his shaft, using her hand to stimulate the part she could suck as her head bobbed up and down.

couldn't

This is a good story I hope you continue

As awesome as it may seem to have a boner last all night, it is impossible to have an erection for more than 4 hours without serious health problems because your dick can't get oxygen when it's like that. The thought of my penis falling off kinda distracted me from the chapter.

9037228
Try thinking of it this way, at some point when they fall asleep it eventually goes soft and when they are starting to wake up the stimulations of the bodies moving starts making it aroused.

9037376
It's kind of a long shot that your flaccid cock would be able to stay inside the woman all night and not have slipped out unless they slept like a corpse.

9181041
Sorry kinda having a block at the moment on the story but I'm trying to get back to it soon.

9181357
aha,very well then,i shall continue to wait :eeyup::yay:

The story kinda lost its appeal after it turned into them just coming over and having sex instead of the thrill and interesting way of doing it as a surprise to them through the doll. Story kinda lost what made it different in the sea of smut.

I dont think they should ignore the doll it might get jealous

9218493
This is exactly it for me as well. It felt like the author suddenly got worried that a voodoo sex doll would be too dark without consent and very quickly steered the story away from that and into something completely "safe", but at the same time very mundane. What's the point in having the doll when they pretty much stop using it the moment the Mane 6 find out about it? Not to mention their reaction is extremely mild - it basically boils down to "Oh, okay, cool, let's just have sex normally now whenever instead".
As twisted as it sounds, I came to this story hoping for the "ghost rape" angle, and Flutterheart going overboard with the doll and basically fucking half the town, as these sorts of magical utilities tend to go. Instead, it turned into a lukewarm slice of life with a lot of plain sex in it with little real buildup or explanation.

9227236
To be honest, I kinda felt like it was straying away from its original point, I'm hoping the next one I do can pull it back.
A certain Bookworm at home in her library being taught that she can't always keep her head in the books.
I do have a plan for the doll but the question is, how well will the plan be received?.

9227534
You're really pulling a Scott Cawthon there? :duck:

Just joking, but still it shall be received in one way or another.

9218493

9227236you guys also forget the most important part. He is a total shutin and antisosial dude, and from not talking to anyone or seeing someone to straight up fucking them in less then a day. Also why, why have the dool at all fter the secound chapter.

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I personally agree with metalgurd, the doll/ ghost sex thing made it stand out. Especially how it is done in the first character. Right now the doll feels like a lacklustre afterthought.

Though if you plan for the doll to become alive sort of or get its own personality than im hooked again

Edit: I just saw when the last update was so any new chapter is appreciated

another year gone by, still holding hope for this story since the author is still active...not much hope, but some

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