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The story kinda lost its appeal after it turned into them just coming over and having sex instead of the thrill and interesting way of doing it as a surprise to them through the doll. Story kinda lost what made it different in the sea of smut.
I dont think they should ignore the doll it might get jealous
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This is exactly it for me as well. It felt like the author suddenly got worried that a voodoo sex doll would be too dark without consent and very quickly steered the story away from that and into something completely "safe", but at the same time very mundane. What's the point in having the doll when they pretty much stop using it the moment the Mane 6 find out about it? Not to mention their reaction is extremely mild - it basically boils down to "Oh, okay, cool, let's just have sex normally now whenever instead".
As twisted as it sounds, I came to this story hoping for the "ghost rape" angle, and Flutterheart going overboard with the doll and basically fucking half the town, as these sorts of magical utilities tend to go. Instead, it turned into a lukewarm slice of life with a lot of plain sex in it with little real buildup or explanation.
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To be honest, I kinda felt like it was straying away from its original point, I'm hoping the next one I do can pull it back.
A certain Bookworm at home in her library being taught that she can't always keep her head in the books.
I do have a plan for the doll but the question is, how well will the plan be received?.
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You're really pulling a Scott Cawthon there?
Just joking, but still it shall be received in one way or another.
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9227236you guys also forget the most important part. He is a total shutin and antisosial dude, and from not talking to anyone or seeing someone to straight up fucking them in less then a day. Also why, why have the dool at all fter the secound chapter.
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I personally agree with metalgurd, the doll/ ghost sex thing made it stand out. Especially how it is done in the first character. Right now the doll feels like a lacklustre afterthought.
Though if you plan for the doll to become alive sort of or get its own personality than im hooked again
Edit: I just saw when the last update was so any new chapter is appreciated
another year gone by, still holding hope for this story since the author is still active...not much hope, but some
will it continue soon?