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U R mom gay?
We will see how this goes
Huh. Tracking this.
okay I like it that the dolls came alive, but I kind of dislike it that they had to have the probably typicall prn personality, always willing, ready and more than eager to please.
It would be nice to have some different personalites.
or nobody, or kevin, or calvin, or marvin, or Benny, or steffan, or.....yes anon get's old for me.
Could even write Y/n, that would be kind of the same since it means your name.
If they kind of wake him up with jerking him of or something I'm going to call them raping dolls.
MOAR PLEASE MOAR CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The main char appears kind of lifeless as if he was bored, not sure why I image him like that.
I would have prefered it without the magic or hornieness, no matter if I like such stories or not, I still prefer them if they are more uuhhhmm well with more feeling in it, something sweet and nice if you know what I mean, but like I said I think this story maybe has a differnt problem.
may i ask that you check your grammar please, I may not be an administrator but I do know that instead of using a word like job in-place of thing is not a good Idea, besides things would be a lot easier for you if you re-read your sentences, it can be cumbersome if not corrected.
But, don't the EG dolls already look like Barbie dolls?
nice work on both chapters so far.
Interesting concept so ill keep an eye on this, however it does have some flaws like the characters feeling a bit 1 dimensional, the main character being like he's not even there and i hope the dolls are not gonna remain small for to long cuz all the sexy stuff feels kinda empty without any actual action going on.
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Well at some point they will have the ability to become full size and to go back to doll size when they want to.
As for the characters, what do you mean by 1 dimentional? as that confuses me.
I suffer from autism so I do kinda have a hard time with things and from the looks of it in writing emotions and such seems to be hard for me.
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Well, by that i mean they are way to willing to go into sexual acts, typical porn personality as it was pointed out in earlier comments made by Texus. It sums up the same issues i have but its not that big of a deal, im having fun with this so far.