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dragenfire68


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you know i wasnt going to read this because i thought twi was the one going to die but now all 4 best pones have gone to the dark side I'm like YES!

Spelling could use some work, but other than that?

A reckoning is coming to the Human World. And no one can stop it.

Hmmm time for Ragnorock

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well.. that escilated quickly

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What if you lived for thousand years, and kept losing friends or family due to PTSD or what Sunset went through, what would you do with your godly might?

Dis is gonna be good đŸ˜ˆ

:flutterrage: Give them hell girls! FOR SUNSET!!!

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i can't help wonder how much better this would be ig it was early morning right before the students and faculty started to arrive

Oh i cant wait i really hope they do a way of revealing what the human 5 did to sunset personally i would go with alter built in the remains ofnthe school with sunset placed it covered up and when one of them pulls the cover off they see the words "all your fault" writen everywhere with a "now pay the price for your sins" or something

ohh their screwed

sorry girls, but the gods that were watching are now hunting you.

I'm not reading this for the plot. I'm not reading this for the grammar. I'm not even reading this to see what kind of retribution the 4 fallen alicorns rain upon the HuMane 5.

I'm reading this purely for how over the top this is being handled.

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XD

at least it doesn't completely crash and burn.

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Don't get me wrong, the plot is above decent, the grammar could be better(couldn't everyone's?), and the retribution is what half those who read these fics look forward to, but I am just flat-out LOVING how over the top things have gotten.

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Sweet, what do you think RD and applejacks punishment should be

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They are being chased by Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, correct?

I have always been a fan of Karmic Retribution, but I have something special in mind for these two, given Nightmare Moon's involvement.

The truth of Anon-a-miss is revealed to Applejack and Rainbow Dash by Apple Bloom and Scootaloo. followed up by Daybreaker and Nightmare using their magic to force Applejack and Rainbow to kill their sisters, before Nightmare curses both with an eternal sleep in which they relive the nightmare of killing their sisters in increasingly darker ways, over and over, and over, and over, until the end of time, or the Human world is destroyed. Both AJ and RD will not age while in the sleep, and only Nightmare Moon/Luna can release them from it.

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Yes to Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon chasing them, or my suggestion?

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Yes too day breaker chasing applejack and rainbow dash.

As for what's gonna happen, well you'll have too see.

Ah ah ah ah ah the gods whrate

Still waiting for tge next chapter

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That doesn't seem like justice it seems like revenge which is like nuclear war in that there are no victors only the vanquished.

I'm reading the short description and I'm like... The brightest star just went supernova

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