Legends say that every pony alive is a star in Luna's night sky, their hopes and dreams giving them the luminosity to shine, but it wasn't a legend, and the brightest star of all goes out.
I'm not reading this for the plot. I'm not reading this for the grammar. I'm not even reading this to see what kind of retribution the 4 fallen alicorns rain upon the HuMane 5.
I'm reading this purely for how over the top this is being handled.
8826426 Don't get me wrong, the plot is above decent, the grammar could be better(couldn't everyone's?), and the retribution is what half those who read these fics look forward to, but I am just flat-out LOVING how over the top things have gotten.
8826498 They are being chased by Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, correct?
I have always been a fan of Karmic Retribution, but I have something special in mind for these two, given Nightmare Moon's involvement.
The truth of Anon-a-miss is revealed to Applejack and Rainbow Dash by Apple Bloom and Scootaloo. followed up by Daybreaker and Nightmare using their magic to force Applejack and Rainbow to kill their sisters, before Nightmare curses both with an eternal sleep in which they relive the nightmare of killing their sisters in increasingly darker ways, over and over, and over, and over, until the end of time, or the Human world is destroyed. Both AJ and RD will not age while in the sleep, and only Nightmare Moon/Luna can release them from it.
I'm not reading this for the plot. I'm not reading this for the grammar. I'm not even reading this to see what kind of retribution the 4 fallen alicorns rain upon the HuMane 5.
I'm reading this purely for how over the top this is being handled.
vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/onepunchman/images/f/f4/Mosquito_Girl%27s_other_evil_grin.png/revision/latest?cb=20151018013256 Oh So Much Fun!! *evil laughter*
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XD
at least it doesn't completely crash and burn.
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Don't get me wrong, the plot is above decent, the grammar could be better(couldn't everyone's?), and the retribution is what half those who read these fics look forward to, but I am just flat-out LOVING how over the top things have gotten.
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Sweet, what do you think RD and applejacks punishment should be
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They are being chased by Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, correct?
I have always been a fan of Karmic Retribution, but I have something special in mind for these two, given Nightmare Moon's involvement.
The truth of Anon-a-miss is revealed to Applejack and Rainbow Dash by Apple Bloom and Scootaloo. followed up by Daybreaker and Nightmare using their magic to force Applejack and Rainbow to kill their sisters, before Nightmare curses both with an eternal sleep in which they relive the nightmare of killing their sisters in increasingly darker ways, over and over, and over, and over, until the end of time, or the Human world is destroyed. Both AJ and RD will not age while in the sleep, and only Nightmare Moon/Luna can release them from it.
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Yes
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Yes to Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon chasing them, or my suggestion?
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Yes too day breaker chasing applejack and rainbow dash.
As for what's gonna happen, well you'll have too see.
Ah ah ah ah ah the gods whrate
Still waiting for tge next chapter
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Workin on it
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Cool
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Waiting.
More?
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Hiatus
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Aw.