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BubblePuff


I am a brony and a long time writer. This site will be for my MLP fanfiction, and you can read my other works on Deviantart.com under the name potsticker13.

Comments ( 21 )

Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?

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I ignore the dislikes.

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I needed a name for her evil form.

It has a good premise behind it... But I feel like the story is lacking in detail.

So what is going to happen after Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie being corruption?

I don't know about Pinkie Pie, but Fluttershy will probably become Flutterbat.

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Just wait and see

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To be fair out of all the Main seven Rainbow Dash is the only one that never really got a notable evil counterpart in either Canon and/or Fanon, even at times in the show and comics when the entire main six had evil versions Rainbow's never really stood out, a bit ironic.

I was going to complain about some typos but then I read the word "orgamism" and suddenly I didn't care!

Mmm, Chapters could be a little longer. More detailed, but over all its alright... I read it but I cant really get drawn in, it just ends to quickly for me. Also there didnt seem like a lot in Pinkies chapter. But them are my thoughts.

interesting concept, but as the others already thought: chapter much too short, because you could have written more, so can contribute more details for a little variety :twilightsheepish:
was there a reason why the chapters were getting shorter and shorter?
but I'm still waiting for new chapters and maybe it will be better :yay:

I know this is a completely irrelevant question to the corruption sex going on, but...What are capris?

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A type of pants that women wear. Just look at Rainbow Dash's outfit from Equestria Girls: Legends of Everfree to see what I'm talking about.

Sauron taking over the Main 7. I am strangely o.k.with this.

One thing can be said about Sci-Twi she's weak minded. Weaker than her Equestrian counterpart.

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So they went with a upgrade from the Nightmare universe from Cutie Re-marked.

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The crazy Pinkie from Party for One.

This story's Anatagonist(or Protagonist? IDK) kind of inspired me to make them the Anatagonist on one of my Stories on Wattpad.

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