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Citrus Recluse


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Why cant u do mind control with femdom again or finsish adagio serie

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*ALGORITHMS.*

But more seriously, it's because of priorities, scheduling, and workflow. I do commissions, meaning clients pay me to cater to their specific interests, so those naturally have to take a higher priority than things like Her Way With Words, which I don't see financial returns on, and being able to do both effectively involves a lot of scheduling, discipline, and time management, which I am ... not always good at.

“But … there is an old house nearby. Just a few blocks from the farm. If you go all the way down off a few blocks to the southeast here, and keep on until you run past the maple trees on( Elm Street), you should be able to find it..”

Elm street i can all ready see this going bad for twi

“Yet you couldn’t figure out that Sunset Shimmer was actually from an alternate dimension before the crown incident,” Twilight muttered dryly under her breath.

To be fair, Twilight, no one figured that out. :p

But damn this was great. That ending scene with the blood-sucking and orgasm was well-written and very hot.

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D'aw, thanks! Trying to figure out, "how I do make parasitic bloodsucking sexy?" was a bit of a challenge, so I'm glad to hear I've met it.

Oh, clever! I like the two versions conversing and hatching this devious plan. Very smart of them to do!

And the turning scene was, again, very well-done and erotic.

I'm torn between the desire for more sexy vampire enthrallment and to see Twilight's friends as vampire hunters in an adventure!

Twilight stroked her chin. If there were ghosts here, and she could bring back scientific, empirical evidence of such, she might just win a Nobel Prize for science. But she’d set out on this expedition under the assumption there were no such thing, and didn’t have any scientific instrumentation, and it would be too much time and effort to go back to her house to get something. If she did see anything, she’d have nothing but eyewitness testimony, which might be good enough for the courts, (perhaps in some cases too good) but not for a claim as easily dismissed as seeing ghosts.

Wow. I expected her to think about something else rather than the Nobel Prize, but kudos.

Lovely Darling, just lovely! :raritystarry:

Not really where I expected this to end, but definitely much better edited this time around.

I liked the story, however there ia one thing that bothers me:Rarity is extremely OOC.My opinion may be biased because she is my favorite character, but she felt so superficial in this story.

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