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Mr_Jekyll_and_Dr_Hyde
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Mr_Jekyll_and_Dr_Hyde
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Still needs work. Not enough emotion or reaction coming from Jackson as I would like to see.
Lastly, that was a looooong detail of what happened to earth, and it looked more toward the USA whenever you say 'we'. I got confused because I thought you were talking about the whole human race, not a nation. Also, if you're going to make it that long, make it a prologue introduction chapter, just for the people who wants to read that or benefit the ones who want to get to the story. I know you want to show everyone, but it could get quite boring if it's just facts/intel for a good bit of it.
That's my bit. Hope that helps you out in the future.
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Thanks I'll fix it
Good start so far! I cant wait to see where it goes.
The other story that you make was good but I think it got messed up by the end of it I hope that this rewrite is better. Also can't wait for the next chapter!
Ill be watching this story for updates
Damn Twilight`s a b****
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Just wonder but how is it so far
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In my opinion not counting those idiots who are Grammar Nazis. The story is going it's okay for now. Obviously the more chapters I see the better going to be. The other one I didn't like it that much because it kind of got like a little bit messed up. It looks like in this story the pones are racist I hope they get their asses handed to them.
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Don't worry they will. Heh heh heh.
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excellent~~
Continuing to watch this story lovin the development
It's good, but the constant POV changes are hard to follow.
I think their also might be some commas missing, otherwise, it's a good story
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Thanks
Damn
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Damn good or damn bad
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Damn good!!!!!
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oh, thank god. So what you liking so far.
i am expecting sorta good things from this story
I don't normally like your human and you ish story's with the evil ponies but this is really good (but I still like your human and you I'm just saying like it with evil ponies)
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Glad you like it. Sorry about the wait I have to get all my ducks in a row.
Correction: It's
Correction: ran
I would enjoy more of this story.
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Don’t worry more will come. It exam/graduation week. So wait till Monday
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More?
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Will soon been real busy over the summer
Correction: mag.
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Thanks I always forget
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Thanks I’ll have to reference this pic later
Hmm.
Meh. Humans vs Ponies aren't my taste and cup of tea. But, I'll continue to follow the story as much as I can.
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAA! THIS STORY MAKES ME HAPPY!
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its ponies that are worse xenophobes than the imperium of mankind vs every other race plus a super-powered god human cyborg, in my opinion, I like it
AWESOME STORY MY DUDE!
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If that's your opinion then I'll respect it.
I like
Please continue
i liked the original even when it started going off the rails, so I'll add this to my tracking list and leave a like as well.
At least Celestia learns that you reap what you sow
O_o' Wow. Out-Of-Character-Twilight. It's been long since I've encountered this rare specie.
Uh... Wow. That's a princess of unfriendship for you. Might be fun to observe this rare breed.
On the other hand:
I'm kinda conflicted with the idea of eating something you just talked with. Even though leaving his body to rot would bring a plethora of problems.
So, this one is not going off the rails, isn't it? The more I read the less I'm sure there ever been rails anywhere nearby. That makes derailing impossible, though. Definitely a positive trait.
You know, he acted here just as fucked up as Celly. Experiments on prisoners, seriously? And everyone ok with that? I'm not even sure most of the guard knew what's wrong out would keep actively supporting Celly after they find out. Also, what is the point of that drug if it wears off immediately? Also, when exactly Spike learned to kill ponies? He may hate what Celly did to him, but that far from enough to do what he did here.
Red(simmons?) vs blue(tucker?)
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Correct
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Nice
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