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Very good start so far. The only advise I can give is this do not be afraid of da memes.
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Thanks! I appreciate it! Took me awhile to find how on earth to start the story off, but I made do!
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Also if you are going to bring in another displaced don't have them come in untill after five chapters have been compleated and make sure that who ever gets pulled in helps progress the story.
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Thanks for the tip! I'll make sure to keep track of that!
When I saw the title, I thought this was gonna be Shadow Man as in the one from Shadow Man 64 or the comic. Btw, you might want to include a status on if or when there'll be cross-overs.
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I didn't realize there was a comic! As for crossovers it'll be good for a cross-over in two more chapters! Actually, should I put that in the description?
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Yes, that way people will know and not ask later.
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Will do!
Oh! I forgot this was here.
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Sorry, I've been busy at school with tests and the like. But yeah! New chapter!
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I still don't know if you'll be crossing over with others or just having the story as the main focus only.
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I definitely will have some crossovers later, but maybe I'll do a spin-off where he doesn't and doesn't interact outside the universe he's currently in.
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Good idea, keep the cross-overs seperate from the main story, that way you can have fun without worrying.
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Bullseye!
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oh, that poor bull's eye.. :p
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Oh...oh god...That sounds rather cruel when you put it like that.....
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I'm joking though. D=
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I know, but still... I'll never see that comment in the same light ever again...
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oh! i'm sorry.
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lol
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CANNOT UNSEE!
holy crap
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Is it bad?
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no this story is holy
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Thanks? I just wanted a creative outlet....Hello! I'm his ego manifested in the form of Bill Cipher, but he's trying to say, Thank you very much! BILL!!!
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Cool
Kewl story really like it but I would like at least a rough estimate on when the next chapter will come out
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I'm writing it whenever I can, but the free time I have can limit it from a few days, a week, to a month. I'm sorry I don't have a set time, but I'll try to get it out by this weekend! I'm also glad you've been enjoying it!
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Somewhere around one week fooken noice
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If I have a few hours of non stop concentration I could do an entire chapter.
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Same but with motivation
are u dead
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Nope, just dealing family issues popping up every 48 hours. I'm almost done with the next one, so keep an eye out for the next one!
Will you be updating the story?
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Yep. In fact, right now!
more updates please
Always with the bulky musculature. No-one ever goes for lean protagonists. It's getting a bit irritating at this point.
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Do you think I should go with Dax being lean? I had a few thoughts about it, but I didn't think much on implementing it.
I believe I have found an error. I think what you meant to type was 'tea' for drinking anything other than tea is blasphemy.
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Nein, I'm afraid you're mistaken. Coffee is the best beverage around for drinking, whilst tea is blasphemy. It's confusing, yes, but it surely is.
Here's hoping there not another nearly year long wait.
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Correction: Sweet Tea is better.
Butt*
more soon?
Been four years , think they're gone for good.