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Halo: Blackened Skies

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The dragon hunter

The dragon hunter #1 · Jan 24th, 2018 · 1 · · Lost...(Old) ·

You have my attention
Seriously, the story starts well, the narration pace is good, the protagonists acts like a Sangheili actually would, and OMG the details. Not only describing the underground tunnels under the old Everfree Castle, but also for the description of the creatures (Glowtooths, uh? Definitely something I hope never meet in real life ), but also the references to the Halo universe.
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BoltSlayer #2 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

This story has gotten my attention not only cause its references the Halo universe but it also has the castle of the two sisters i'm excited to see how Luna and Celestia deal with Xor

Starlight Nova #3 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

Is there really a Halo 5?

Dreadknight garen

Dreadknight garen #4 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

8688559
yeah, it sucks for everything except new halo lore

PapaChanka #5 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

This really has peeked my interests, I hope you keep up the good work

draco the flamewing

draco the flamewing #6 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

Well written my friend. I shall wait for the next chapter, ever patient.

The Lunar Rebel

The Lunar Rebel #7 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

8688559
Do you really have to ask stupid questions instead of leaving actual comments; or do you just like to act like an ignoramus.

badassgrunt #8 · Jan 24th, 2018 · · · Lost...(Old) ·

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I was actually pleased when we got to go to Sangheilios. The Sangheili are the only species of alien( other than Ponies) that I don't have a Warhammer 40K attitude to them.

PewDashiePie #9 · Jan 26th, 2018 · · · Of Monsters and Equines ·

I love this so far. The description of the Glowtooth creatures is so vivid and detailed that every part of me is screaming for an artist to come out and create a representation of the beasts- you have me won over. Favoriting and tracking this story.

The creature was bent forward, a long sweeping tail providing balance. It had only one arm, small and undeveloped, on the underside of its core. On two legs. Around the size of a Doarmir.

(For comparison,
the Sangheili/gray creature to the left are normally 7'4"
to 8'6") pre00.deviantart.net/bb18/th/pre/i/2014/103/8/5/sanghelian_animals___colo_and_doarmir_by_dragunalb-d7eao9c.jpg

It had far too many teeth, more than what you would think could be possible through evolution. They were needle-like, and seemed to glow of their own accord. It had one single eye, black as the darkness around them. It didn't seem to have any sort of eyelids, not blinking once in the bright light. It's skin was white, the same shade one would expect to evolve into with generations of no sunlight. The skin seemed to shimmer slightly. It was covered in short hair. Said hair was nearly completely translucent. The creature's saliva was acidic, enough to corrode through rock. Their teeth did indeed glow in the dark, emitting a sickly pale green light, that reflected off their glossy black eye. Its face was similar in shape to a Kig-Yar, with its wide and long jaw.

(These are Kig-Yars, for reference.) vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/marvelcrossroads/images/3/32/Kig-Yar_Types_%28Earth-5340%29.png/revision/latest?cb=20151211153509

PapaChanka #10 · Jan 26th, 2018 · 2 · · Of Monsters and Equines ·

I should eat your ass for the cliffhanger

badassgrunt #11 · Jan 26th, 2018 · 3 · · Of Monsters and Equines ·

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badassgrunt #12 · Jan 29th, 2018 · · · Negotiations ·

I swear that the text was indented when I edited it.

BoltSlayer #13 · Jan 30th, 2018 · · · Negotiations ·

im excited to see twilight react to Xor

PewDashiePie #14 · Aug 7th, 2018 · · · Negotiations ·

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I REALLY hope you continue this story. It's the only Halo one I think I've taken liking too.

Mkchief34 #15 · Oct 2nd, 2018 · · · Chapter 1: Fog Of War ·

Nice update!

crossed

crossed #16 · Oct 7th, 2018 · · · Land Of Impossibilities ·

They turned a corner and was greeted with a door at the far end of the short hallway. A single female Keifra-alien in armor stood guard. The alien

chapter ends abruptly, pls fix

Bronzer

Bronzer #17 · Nov 14th, 2018 · 1 · · Chapter 3: Shaky Negotiations ·

I’m pleasantly surprised at going the rare tiny anthro ponies route instead of the overwhelmingly common giant anthro.

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