The Witcher: Shadow of the Moon

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hs0003

hs0003 #1 · Jun 14th, 2016 · 2 · · Contract ·

Keep him as true to character as you can and I could see this overcoming the other Witcher stories easily.

Ps. instead of 'superior' and so on, I'd suggest using terms such as 'personally modified' or similar.
Basically rename the things that makes sense in a game but would sound idiotic in a movie.

Isumo1489

Isumo1489 #2 · Jun 14th, 2016 · 1 · · Contract ·

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Eh, Superior Grade could be in world lingo, and of all the points, a rather minor one. Kinda wish his gear was maxed out actually, if he winds up in Equestria he might not be able to get the better stuff made should he want to. That said, a good start and looking forward to more. Also...CMC? Welp, this is something they might have gotten into, I'd say.

badassgrunt

badassgrunt #3 · Jun 17th, 2016 · · · Contract ·

7302458 Took your advice, changed it to Grandmaster.

Isumo1489

Isumo1489 #4 · Jun 17th, 2016 · · · Contract ·

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SWEET!!! I'm still going through Blood and Wine myself, loving the DLC like you would not believe...the Riding combat and time trial for the Tourney though was a PAIN!! Still got all the prizes, but still a pain!!

Can hardly wait to see more from ya!

Isumo1489

Isumo1489 #5 · Jun 23rd, 2016 · · · Eyes of the Wolf ·

Hmmmm, an excellent second chapter, and unless I'm wrong I'm betting Applejack senses Geralt's mutations. It makes sense with her Earth Pony magic that certain things twisted from nature by the Witcher trials and such would set her on edge. Still, I hope she gets over it quickly, an Applejack too stubborn and given to distrust is one from much earlier seasons and frankly annoys the ever-loving crap out of me. All in all, great work, and in my own Playthrough just completed most of the available side missions and checked out every available hidden area in Toussaint. Not progressed far in the main story-line and accidentally used a re-set potion on all my hard earned mutations from the DLC...finding red mutagens and moreover finding those damned cherries to make more has been next to impossible. So not happy with progress.

Still, got my Grandmaster Griffin gear and it works very well! Moreover, with the new blades and my personal load-out of Quen, Igni, and Yrden...especially that last one, been taking down even the toughest monters who are 7 levels above me or better! New effects of it with the Armor Set are beyond awesome!!

Anyway, best of luck and take care!

Rosomak

Rosomak #6 · Jun 23rd, 2016 · · · Eyes of the Wolf ·

Nice chapter, but...

Geralt artfully stabbed it through the eye and into the brain. Blood splashed out and the Timberwolf twitched once before hanging limply on his sword. Geralt withdrew it just in time for one to close its jaws around one of his legs. Geralt winced and managed to kick it off. The wooden wolf bared its wooden teeth and lunged. Geralt rolled out of the way. Geralt, too, lunged at the wolf and ripped open its side.

You use to many "Geralt" in nearby sentences. It looks overwhelming. Use "Witcher", "he", "Monster Hunter" instead.