Hmmmm, an excellent second chapter, and unless I'm wrong I'm betting Applejack senses Geralt's mutations. It makes sense with her Earth Pony magic that certain things twisted from nature by the Witcher trials and such would set her on edge. Still, I hope she gets over it quickly, an Applejack too stubborn and given to distrust is one from much earlier seasons and frankly annoys the ever-loving crap out of me. All in all, great work, and in my own Playthrough just completed most of the available side missions and checked out every available hidden area in Toussaint. Not progressed far in the main story-line and accidentally used a re-set potion on all my hard earned mutations from the DLC...finding red mutagens and moreover finding those damned cherries to make more has been next to impossible. So not happy with progress.
Still, got my Grandmaster Griffin gear and it works very well! Moreover, with the new blades and my personal load-out of Quen, Igni, and Yrden...especially that last one, been taking down even the toughest monters who are 7 levels above me or better! New effects of it with the Armor Set are beyond awesome!!
Geralt artfully stabbed it through the eye and into the brain. Blood splashed out and the Timberwolf twitched once before hanging limply on his sword. Geralt withdrew it just in time for one to close its jaws around one of his legs. Geralt winced and managed to kick it off. The wooden wolf bared its wooden teeth and lunged. Geralt rolled out of the way. Geralt, too, lunged at the wolf and ripped open its side.
You use to many "Geralt" in nearby sentences. It looks overwhelming. Use "Witcher", "he", "Monster Hunter" instead.
Geralt rolled out of the way. Geralt, too, lunged at the wolf and ripped open its side.
I think it would be better this way: "Geralt rolled out of the way and lunged at the wolf ripping its side open."
Hmmmm, an excellent second chapter, and unless I'm wrong I'm betting Applejack senses Geralt's mutations. It makes sense with her Earth Pony magic that certain things twisted from nature by the Witcher trials and such would set her on edge. Still, I hope she gets over it quickly, an Applejack too stubborn and given to distrust is one from much earlier seasons and frankly annoys the ever-loving crap out of me. All in all, great work, and in my own Playthrough just completed most of the available side missions and checked out every available hidden area in Toussaint. Not progressed far in the main story-line and accidentally used a re-set potion on all my hard earned mutations from the DLC...finding red mutagens and moreover finding those damned cherries to make more has been next to impossible. So not happy with progress.
Still, got my Grandmaster Griffin gear and it works very well! Moreover, with the new blades and my personal load-out of Quen, Igni, and Yrden...especially that last one, been taking down even the toughest monters who are 7 levels above me or better! New effects of it with the Armor Set are beyond awesome!!
Anyway, best of luck and take care!
Nice chapter, but...
You use to many "Geralt" in nearby sentences. It looks overwhelming. Use "Witcher", "he", "Monster Hunter" instead.
I think it would be better this way:
"Geralt rolled out of the way and lunged at the wolf ripping its side open."
I look forward to further chapters.
A problem, huh. Way to understate, Rainbow Dash.