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I can has first comment? :derpytongue2:

Well written and lovely.

I'm totally not into lesbians, but that picture aroused me, then I laughed.

Not bad, not bad at all. I'll watch this and see where it goes.

Though I don't feel like this suits RD ---> "She groaned in frustration. Halting a big group of clouds like that was a difficult task, even for a flier as skilled as herself." She may be lazy, but she's always up for a challenge. Plus, she's more than just skilled, she's a crazy amazing flier who could probably wipe those clouds out in minutes, if that. But what do I know, I'm just a random brony. :twistnerd:

Dimondium says that you rampantly insist that you are a bad writer.
YOU'RE LYING TO YOURSELF AND YOU KNOW IT!
THIS STORY IS AWESOME!

The description makes me think that this all started out when Twilight dropped a poor, defenseless bomb to its demise, only for RD to save it at the last moment. Deciding to give the poor bomb a chance they've been going with a fairly steady three-way relationship until one fateful night they discover that the bomb is still...active.

ohh noo Rainbow dash dont leave the OH noo this will end horrible:pinkiegasp::pinkiesad2:

The generic Nighttime kiss under the moonlight has been done time and time again, but it never grows old. The personification seems to be here, (Not sure though, it's too early) and the length is decent. It is a perfectly healthy, if normal, Beginning to a TwiDash Fic! I look forward to the rest of it. :twilightblush:

It's been forever since you updated this! When can we expect another chapter?

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