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Evilhumour


Well, this a fan of MLP who has just started to watch the show. And I like what I see!

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Funny story! :rainbowlaugh: I'm surprised that you made Rainbow a male in this story, and both him and Appleajck anthro in it:rainbowhuh:! Not that I'm complaining or anything, I'm just surprised...

There is something that's bugging me though...not the story itself, but the cover art. Where's Rainbow Blitz's wings and both his and Applejack's tails?:unsuresweetie:

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It is the only art that I could find of the two together. If you know of a better one, than share it.

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Ah, I see. Sorry, don't really know of any other fan art with Rainbow and Applejack in anthro mode, I was just curious:twilightsheepish:. Though, if I do happen to come across another similar to this, I'll try and let you know:twilightsmile:.

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Thanks. And how do you like the series so far, by the way?

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It's a pretty good and funny story:pinkiesmile:! I see that you made a little 63 gender swap with a couple of the Mane Six:raritywink:! Not really something that I see in many Fimfictions! Very nice touch:scootangel:. I'm eager to see how it goes.

I do have one question though...are Rainbow and Twilight the only ones you made males?:raritywink:

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Bubble Berry and Solaris are male for one.

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Oh okay, thanks for clearing that up for me:twilightsmile:.

Well, this took an interesting turn, and it's funny ("you're wearing each others' pants":rainbowlaugh:). I wonder about their discomfort though, is this becoming more than just fucking? If so, I don't know how to feel, as with how direct and visceral the last two stories that started this were and Blitz liking that it's just sex makes the idea feel off to me. That aside though, this is certainly an interesting little experiment they're doing, and I'm always up for some TF:pinkiesmile:

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Well, this took an interesting turn, and it's funny ("you're wearing each others' pants":rainbowlaugh:).

I think the pant thing was Anon's doing.

though, is this becoming more than just fucking?

maybe.

That aside though, this is certainly an interesting little experiment they're doing, and I'm always up for some TF:pinkiesmile:

As am I:pinkiehappy:

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I think the pant thing was Anon's doing.

You started it, I elaborated.

Until next time...
Anon e Mouse Jr.

Woah!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :rainbowkiss:

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We are done it, actually. Just need Anon to look over it.

Short but heck it was very GOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!

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Still one more chapter to go but thaaaaaaaank you!

All three of us appreciate it.

What is the Suspenders-verse?

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The Suspender-verse is the universe where Suspenders, Shorts, and this one take place in my multiverse.

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What? You don't like characters from the future?

Whoa,” Blitz said with his eyes and wings going wide as soon as he looked at her. “AJ, I’m not sure how but you just got twenty percent more sexy.”

“Really now?” Applejack said, placing her hands on her waist, opening her wings wider with Blitz looking even more stunned, his eyes roaming her new limbs with his short tail wagging something fierce behind him.

“I mean, you were sexy before, not that I am saying you were not hot before,” Blitz rambled with the tip of his ears heating up as she walked closer to him in the way that always drove him nuts. “But your wings… they’re so big.” he whispered, with his hand reaching out to rub her left wing, causing a wave of delight down her spine and she knew why it caused him to moan for her.

All hail the Apple goddess!

He blinked and frowned, opening his right wing fully and began to look at the two before he looked at her forehead and let out annoyed sigh. “You’re kidding me,” he grumbled with Applejack confused only for a second before she saw what was bugging him this time.

“Even with us both being pegasi, yer still shorter than me,” Applejack grinned as she flicked her larger wing outwards before folding it behind her. Although not by much; instead of needing to standing on the very tips of his hooves or hovering to kiss her on the lips, Blitz would just need to tilt his head upwards with a slight push from the ground.

Big girls are sexy :heart:

“Some things just come easier to other ponies, Dusk,” Rarity said, rubbing his shoulder. She then recalled what Applejack had said about pegasi’s tongues and Earth pony equipment and the fact that alicorns were amplified in all aspects. “Say Dusk, I am curious if I could help you further your research that those two are doing for you.”

“What do you me-no!” Dusk said, as he caught onto what she was trying to do surprisingly fast. “I’m flattered by the offer, but you’re my friend and I respect you too much to use you as a test subject like that.”

Rarity eyed him. “Are you sure?” she asked, batting her lashes at him. “After all, how often is it that you get somepony so… willing to partake in such experiments?”

Dusk caught the meaningful look in her eye, and gulped. Oh boy.

Do it her Dusk! Just do her!

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