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Frozen Quill


I'm just here to take in tales of grand adventure, love and romance. Then perhaps spin a few of my own.

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Not bad granted this is only one chapter there's still a long ways to go but my interest has been peeked good luck on the rest

I like so far just keep them chapters coming at your pace because you my friend have got one hell of a fic going

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Thank you. I'm trying hard to work with my editor in order to make this rewrite better than before. :twilightsheepish:

Huh, from the thumbnail and opening scene I would have thought that this would not only be rosario + vampire with ponies but it would also have some kill la kill elements.
It's good nonetheless though.

8763947
well, Rosario + Vampire is half of the inspiration along with a dream I had. Kill la Kill or the main character, was the inspiration for Amore. Though I've aimed to refine my idea in this rewrite which I think is going well thus far. I'm glad you think it's good and hopes you see where it goes as I progress through it. :twilightblush:

Hearing the title it almost made me think ‘Dance in the vampire bund’

8779544
I can see that. It's possible the anime title was the influence for this title, but it's been so long since I came up with this I wouldn't be able to remember. I know that all the DMM titles I come up with have dances in their titles. :twilightsmile:

It's getting better and better with each chapter I read
BTW how much did you change in the story compared to the original?

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I'm very glad to hear that you believe it's getting better.
In terms of what I've changed? I've taken the base concept of DMM, it's setting and such, then reworked as much as I felt needed. The backstory of Amore for example. The students at the academy now being all the next generation or young fillies in the show aged up. I wanted things to feel comfortable and flow in a way which was vastly improved from the original. The backstory, history, character placement etc. The original was loved and had charm but I felt after a while things were wrong in places. So, I fixed it by remoulding it out of the same materials but improving the quality by a great margin.

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Makes sense to me keep it up bro

8883361
Thank you very much, I shall try hard to do so.

Nice chapter I liked it a lot

9091900
Thank you, I'm glad to be going in the right direction. I know I'm happier with it this time around, much more feeling to it. :moustache:

great job so far, keep up the good work!:twilightsmile:

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Thank you, hopefully you continue to enjoy it. :twilightsmile:

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It's good to be back, hopefully a bit more consistently. I started uni last September so I've been working on that quite a bit. Hopefully people continue to enjoy DMM now I'm able to carry on.

Welcome back great chapter keep it up

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