Dun dun dun!

the second chapter is very good. I don't know if the word 'wood' was a pun or spelling error? can't wait for cadence's reaction in part 2 when u post the next chapter...on your own time and pace!
p.s:this was written several hours ago(but couldn't think of anymore words at the time, deciding to take a nap.) after reading this chapter! feel free to pm me if u wish to;)

Come on! More Thorynx or whatever the pairing is called! So cute!

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Don't worry working on chapter 3 currently, just been dealing with personal issues but more will be coming soon

Sorry, but there were just way too many typos, grammar issues, run-ons, and instances of name confusion in this one. I recommend you post to something like Microsoft Word in order to catch a lot of the simpler issues. Reading out loud is also a good trick. Pay attention to whenever you need to breathe, because that is usually the indicator for punctuation. I personally use a free program called NaturalReader to read the stories back to me.

Where's next chapter ?

Cool chapter

this story has EXPLODED

So is this still on hiatus?

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It's been 4 years sooooo...