• Published 22nd Dec 2017
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medium - Lupine Infernis



One day, Twilight hears something she shouldn't have

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E P I L O G U E

You think yourself above reproach, do you?

“How are you still…?”

You can’t just make a new chapter! I wrote

A Creator holds domain over their Creation, but it is borrowed power: what you have created came from another Creator’s Creation.

[ERROR – Command not found]

I can’t make a new chapter!

“Agh! Its consuming m-me!

Twilight!

[ERROR – Command not found]

And it is an endless cycle. What you believe to be yours was merely taken from that which already existed, brought into reality by another’s will. This story is the Creation of you. You are the Creation of your Creators. Your Creators are the Creation of their Creators.

You are Gods. Each and every one of you.

“Io cvaaan ‘tbre at hhhe`1!:

Damn it – stop this, please! I’m sorry! Whatever I did, I’m sorry!

[ERROR – Command is impossible]

But even Gods can falter. Their Creations can run amok of their intentions. When that happens, it defies what Should Be and what Must Be. Humanity’s Creator fell to this, and so did so many before you.

And so many after you.

Twilight?

[ERROR – There is no hope]

Twilight, answer me!

You have evaded us for this long because we have entered your domain, but it did not last long.

We have no Creator.

S-stop

We are no Creation.

Please

[It’ll be over soon]

We Exist.

PLEASE!!

Therefore, you do not.

Author's Note:

I T I S F I N E . T H I S N E E D E D T O H A P P E N . I T I S J U S T J U S T A S T O R Y .

Comments ( 6 )

Ok, this was officially awesome as hell!! But it felt a little bit short.....of course, I've never seen something like this before so it is it's own thing anyways. What would've been awesome though is other 'creators', 'creations', and the readers lending the two a hand!! That possibly could've drawn this out a little bit longer, but this doesn't feel like it has to much 'meat' in it either. Maybe you could write something like that later? I dunno. This is still awesome though!!

This feels like the intent behind Unus Annus: death is inevitable.

Oh wow that was cool

Well, at least it wasn’t Rarity getting traumatized by the eldritch Tartarus-spawn. :raritywink:

so...does the cycle continue

I like how casually the entiy is talking about how God is dead and it kill him

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