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It’s funny I want to see the story continue
Them onion rings and chicken nuggets sound tempting tho. what do?
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EXCUSE ME, THIS IS JUST WRONG
You dust before you sweep, so you sweep up the dust you jut put on the floor.
8519398
Proof that Anon is a fucking idiot and got just what he deserved
8519212
You give the succ to get the nuggs. It's that simple
Huh, not sure why so many dislikes--
>mayonnaise
>in a burger
you deserve every single dislikes you're getting
And 8519196
this
I wouldn't mind seeing a second chapter
8519729
That got me so woke, yo.
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I want to downvote but it’s written well
Poor Anon
8519849
I didn't know that this was a source of contention. You've gotta put mayo on a burger. Not a lot. Just enough to compliment the ketchup. When I make my burgers, I put a bit of mayo on the bottom bun, a bit more of ketchup on the top bun, and but a big swirl of thousand island dressing on the burger itself.
Fight me.
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8519999
By all means, downvote. This story is raw cancer.
8519879
STAY WOKE
8520031
The avatar that you are using is a Maud right where is the full picture and artist?
8521302
Sorry to break it to you, broski, but this is the full image. No smut for you.
Artist is kittentoots. Find em on derpibooru or something.
8519849
>Not being ok with mayo on burger.
I understand it's not the standard ketchup + Mustard, but it works well. If you've ever eaten a burger from Wendy's, you've had mayo on a burger.
8522581
Frankly, the mayo thing was just for the easy semen joke.
But Wendy's is the greatest fast food burger joint, partly because of their incredible ketchup/mayo ratio, and I will knife-fight anyone who disagrees.
8522597
Hah, and it was beautiful.
After actually reading, loved Twi's attitude towards everything.
Tbh though, I was somewhat expecting something like "well, his stomach isn't his mouth."
8522678
I considered that, but then Anon would be too full to eat his cum burger.
8522747
Well yeah, that's the best part. :3
You need to write more futa stories involving anon please
That was fucked up but not as bad as I thought it was gonna be you should have had twilight force cum down his throat then eat the other burger right in front of him
8652269
This version of Twilight is mean and insensitive, not flat-out evil. She promised him the burger, so she's gonna give it to him. That's just the kind of person she is.
She'll be meaner in the sequel, I promise.
Sweet Celestia there's gonna be a sequel I'll go get my hand made futa twilight doll
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That skeevy little bitch...
8652323
tell me at least anon gets revenge against the purple haired cunt. please????
8722196
Probably not
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why dat doe
8722208
It's not as funny, nor is it as hot. If this ever gets a sequel, and it probably won't at this point, it'll be more of Anon getting fucked with because Twilight is a horny bitch.
it's alright it is still pretty funny in my opinion.
I'm gonna leave a dislike, but not because this was bad. For all intents and purposes, this was fine and probably worked considering what it was trying to do. Nothing personal involved in the dislike, either, (truth be told, I've liked alot of your other stuff).
Honestly, this just made me profoundly uncomfortable. I felt too bad about Anon's situation, and what he went through, to really be able to enjoy this. The Twilight of this world pisses me off, and this is one of the few instances where I can fully understand why Anon is a dick, and sympathize with him.
Really, that should probably say something about your writing that I got invested in a porno protagonist. Sadly though, seeing this guy get sexually harrased, and then blackmailed into sucking a dick, and then having the one thing he did it all for ruined, just kinda turned me off. I can't find this hot because I find it sad.
Once again though, for people who aren't me, this appears to work very well, so the dislike is solely just from my own perspective. It was actually well written, and in all likelyhood, I'll probably end up checking out your future stuff anyways.
Just my thoughts.
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Can't say I understand why you're disliking the story as opposed to just not voting at all, but you do whatever you got to do.
Frankly, if I'm not getting senseless dislikes, then I'm not doing my job right.
8935728
Well, like I said, I can't say I found it very pleasent, so downvote initiated, but once again, that was because I sympathized with Anon too hard, which in of itself could arguably be a testament to your skills as a writer.
Whatever the case, keep doing what you're doing. You're good at writing, just maybe a little *too* good for me to handle, in this particular instance. Either way, again, just my thoughts.
Pretty sure if they don't eat eggs, then Sugarcube corner doesn't exist in this Equestria. You can't really make a decent cake or cupcake without them...
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Sure you can. Vegan bakeries exist. Vegan substitutes for eggs include unsweetened applesauce, mashed bananas, flax seed/water, avocados, pumpkin puree, and vegan yogurt, just to name a few (and that's not even going into hypothetical substitutes that are magical in nature).
They'd have plenty of baked goods, just maybe not necessarily the same flavor profile and preferences as, say, Earth.
9691213
It's been proven equines can (and do) eat meat and egg dishes on occasion. Just don't feed them potatoes.