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Game-BeatX14


Pony wallpaper artist, music producer and fanfiction author.

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Fluttershy is beginning to feel restless sitting at around at home, so she heads out to the local nightclub to try something different. Little does she know, Rainbow Dash happens to be there too. She soon re-discovers the simple joys of getting out and having fun with friends, despite her natural aversion to being in public.

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Short and sweet, I found myself really liking this one-shot.

I was a little surprised though it didn't take much for Fluttershy to build up her courage. There were a few parts that could have used a little more expanding, for example when Fluttershy starts to shake off her nervousness and gets into the music. But, these are only minor things I point out.

Anyway, it was an enjoyable read.

8879959 Thank you for the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! I'll try to work on my pacing during key parts next time. :twilightsmile:

Decent one shot. Good fun read.

Fluttershy could have been a little bit more hesitant to go in but it was otherwise pretty good.

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