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Game-BeatX14


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When Soarin makes a dangerous mistake during an aerial show, nearly injuring his teammates in the process, Spitfire terminates his contract with the Wonderbolts. Hurtful words are spoken, destroying the stallion's faith in himself. Everything seems lost, until a certain pink pony steps in to help him find confidence again.

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this looks like very promising story, can't wait to see what will happen next. always like SoarinPie shipping, for the few that there are.

8028355 Ah crap... This is actually is a completed one-shot story; I forgot to change the status. Just updated it to reflect that. Sorry to burst your bubble, heh. :twilightblush:

Thank you though.

This was a really good story, can we haz sequel?

8028440 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

I really appreciate the interest, but there are no plans for a sequel at the moment. Too many other half-written stories are sitting on my PC waiting to be finished first, lol.

“Don’t you ever let Spitfire tear you down like that. Everypony makes plenty of mistakes, even her. She just doesn’t want to admit it.”

I know what Pinkie's trying get at here, but I'm sorry, Spitfire came across as too much of a bitch for me to sympathize with her. If you'd given her more sympathetic moments in this story, it might have worked, but you didn't and Spitfire just comes across as Bitchfire for me.

Spitfire is a real bitch in this story she’s one to talk after what she did to Soarin and didn’t even see him while he was in the hospital

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