Hearth's Warming Eve is always a time to celebrate with friends and have a big party. But when Pinkie isn't able to, Twilight decides to take it under her hooves. But what if Pinkie Pie decides to take it up a notch? And that's where they are now, with one grinning pink earth pony and two very uncomfortable Pegasi. What has Pinkie done this time? And what does Vinyl Scratch have to do with all of this? (Light hearted Flutterdash, one-shot. Set as a sort of sequel to "Missing Piece")
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"The cream colored male muttered "
I'm pretty sure Fluttershy ain't a male...
1855077 Gosh darn it, how did I miss that!? XD Thank you for pointing that out, I'll fix it right away!
Nice and cute, if a bit short. Grammar was decent, plot was nice if slightly predictable. The one criticism I have is your tendency for ellipses vomit. Try to tone them down a bit.
1855119 :) Thank you kindly. Yes, I agree that I have that habit in almost all of my writing...^^; I'll do my best to improve that.
I agree with cute.
D'awww....
Dwwwwaaaaaaw *melts from an over abundence of feels*
1887086 IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII'm Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeelting ! Too much D'awww!
Man, I was hoping the story would end with Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash ending up
That was such an amazing paragraph, I think You did a great job on Vinyl Scratch's character in this. Good Job