(Based on Prompt #207 of 30minponies: Celestia Rises) The revolution between two sisters finally implodes, and fellow ponies must choose to walk into the light or stay in the shadows. Family will be separated and friends will become enemies...but can one Pegasus truly keep her sanity when her most precious of friends seems to pretend that nothing is wrong? Or...is that friend only biding her time? (Flutterdash, can be taken as both romantic and friendship)
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With a title like that, you missed a huge opportunity to ship Celestia with Batman
A bit rough around the edges, but the whole "divided loyalties" thing hits hard. Luna warring with Celestia (again) is one of those chilling scenarios that's a little too plausible for comfort.
Interesting. I think you have potential to become a really good writer, if you work hard. I'm not sure what you should improve on here, but I will look at your other stories and see if I can help you there. I do have one question, although it is unrelated to the fic itself. What Flutterdash fanfic were you reading at the time?
Keep up the good work!