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Lightning Dust suffers a life changing eye injury during a solo attempt to perform a Sonic Rainboom, leaving her unable to see straight. One kind gray mare hopes to help her overcome this new impairment and get back on track.

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This better be a ship.

Also, great story! :rainbowkiss:

7796689 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. :pinkiehappy:

I wanted to hint at some light shipping in this story without it being too serious. Like a little sailboat instead of a giant cargo ship. :derpytongue2:

Unexpected but... I like it.:twilightsmile: Maybe see more of this kind of unexpected ships.

7797133 I love to write about uncommon pairings, keeps things interesting. Thanks for the follow! :twilightsmile:

7797167 No problem. If I may suggest a uncommon pairing. Spitfire and Fluttershy. Comment back to see what you think.

Awww. I've never seen a Lightning/Derpy fic. Please continue or write a sequel. I liked Lightning Dust. She was like a more honest version of Rainbow Dash. Braggart, yes, but she lived up to everything she said. Too bad she was so reckless. She could have been an awesome Wonderbolt, and I would have loved seeing how Rainbow dealt with having to work with Lightning.

7797182 It's a good suggestion, but I don't really have any ideas for what kind of story to write with them. Plus there are too many other fics that I've already started writing that need to be finished first :/

7797323 She's one of my favorite characters, despite her relatively short screen time in the series. I'm super glad you enjoyed it :D

Not sure if there will be a sequel, since this was intended to be a short one-shot. But there is always a possibility if I feel like expanding on it later :D

kinda reminds me of my own story with Lightning Dust and Derpy. (I refuse to call her muffins unless I'm somehow in a court room) It's not my best work, but I don't regret writing it.

That was actually a pretty decent story. I think maybe it would've worked better if it was longer; that way, the transitioning might've been more natural and flowing. But as is, it's a sweet tale. Good job!

This is...... excellent!!!:pinkiehappy:

Aw, Dery Dusty. I never thought of what would happen if Lightning lost or had obscure vision. Derpy helping her was a nice touch.

Nice to have a tragedy that doesn't remain a tragedy.

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