This story takes place some time after the "Gauntlet of fire" episode, just an idea that crossed my mind afte re-watching it, and is going to be about one of my favourite ships: spikebloom!
Also, this is my first ever fanfic, so, please be patient if I don't have a perfect orthography or if I don't know how to keep the story " in the mood", Constructive criticism is requested
Spike and Apple bloom have been great friends, but feelings are discovered when spike goes to the dragon lands to solve some politic poblems with princess ember. While Apple Bloom has a secret crush on Spike, he is still dealing with his crush on Rarity. Let's find out what happens...
Meant to be fluffy, harmless and totally fictional, no offenses to other Spike/Apple Bloom ships and just meant to be an average story in general.
Blooming scales!!!!
She's blooming for Spike.
Maybe Winona could push those two together.
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Wow, you're interested in this story, right?, I've seen you comment in every chapter!
I think you mean at school not on school
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Sorry, like I said, I need to work on tese things
I believe the comma doesn't need to be there. And it's missing a period at the end I guess.
Two 'f's in the word 'affirmed'. And Twilight's name needs to be capitalized.
No need for the comma behind the question mark, should probably move it after the next part as it is missing something at the end.
The 'r' in 'reassured' should be capitalized. And another period is needed at the end.
The comma and period after the exclamation marks aren't needed. And the quotation mark is a space off.
The colon doesn't need to be there. Spike's name should be capitalized. The commas don't need to come after ellipses, exclamation marks, or question marks. The apostrophe is a space off and the 'I' in "I'm" should be capitalized. Missing a space with the longer hum. The 'a' in 'and' after "I've got it!" should be capitalized.
It would be 'through the house' and 'throughout the house'.
But it was worthless. Her sister wasn't in the house, so she ran to the barn. 'Please' should be capitalized. 'She' as well should be capitalized. Capital 'm' in the 'maybe'. Applejack isn't an 'it'. Apostrophe doesn't need to be there after 'I'. Repeat. Period should be behind the quotation mark.
"We're used to seeing this phrase in the past tense, even though it did use to be otherwise."
Good luck.
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wow, just wow
little
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Okay, I'm starting to think that my orthography and my grammar are just horrible and are hopeless too.
it
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Okay, now i'm convinced
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na just practice and maybe a editor
A wonderful story so far, I really enjoy the read of it. I really hope you continue this, it's really fun to read and gives the right amount of adorabeties.
Also I guess I got to break the tie breaker of the thumbs
hope you have a wonderful day.
Sincerely,
Sar Meister
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Thank you!, I will continue, but school and homework take away a lot of my time, so, the next chapter will be out in a few days, maybe a week later, but I WILL continue
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HUZZAH!!!! Awesome, hope you have a wonderful day then
daww this ship is sailing strong
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, so I don't know if I'm going to do a sequel
Maybe, but I don't know yet, this story is not getting much positive feedback
this is awesome and so cute
AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!