The proprietor of the series known as 'Sweet Special-Nothings'. Well known for the story Hop, Skip, and a Jump! And First Date. Also wrote the Conversion Bureau tale, A Mare's Tail.
Braeburn asks Big Mac to pay him a visit in Appleoosa to help straighten out a mess he's gotten himself into. Big Mac offers his advice, but soon gets more than he bargained for out of the trip.
Loosely connected to Hop, Skip, and a Jump. Not required reading.
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As always happens in any fanfiction I found typos, but less than most, and not enough to bother finding them again. As I have stated on some of your other stories I quite enjoy your writing, and how you try to connect your stories to each other in some way each time. I am not quite sure how Big Macintosh would act at a party though... He would probably stand near the snack table and be quiet most of the time, but he might act more like he did in Lesson Zero. I hope Butterscotch stays a mane character in your stories, but I guess I have to read through the rest to find that out.
This was a very enjoyable read! The story and characters felt canon, and there was enough twists to keep me guessing without excessively drawing out the story or slowing it's pace.
You oughta consider rewriting this sometime. There's a decent story in it, and I know you could tell it better nowadays.
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You think? Hm. Maybe, this whole plot arc is something I've wished to revisit for awhile now.
This is a cute fic and I love poor Mac thinking he's seeing double. I feel like this fic was too short though, nothing really gets resolved except Brae deciding he can try being sheriff after all.