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Sliverfish


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It's another Apple Family Reunion. Big Macintosh, Braeburn and Caramel are all colts at the time and bored out of their mind. When one of them has an idea on how to break their boredom. Hey, a bored teenager came up with that idea. What could POSSIBLY go wrong?

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Just the title and description were enough for me to give this a thumbs up. Yay for stupid teenagers!!

That was a nice short story.:ajsmug:

Would've given you a thumps up but i don't have fingers. :twilightblush:

too bad we don't know what caramel sounds like...

Hooray for stupid, bored, teenage colts!:facehoof:

Thanks for the feedback! I just came up with this while listening to "Summer Paradise" by Simple Plan :P I just wanted to squeeze in the Nirvana reference. :pinkiehappy:

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"First Regidar, and now you! What's gotten into you guys, with all this I can't get to sleep!"
Great story, I loved this! :rainbowkiss:

901224>>901388 Thank you! You guys are too sweet. :ajsmug:

You forgot their accents, and your narration could be little smoother, it's good other than that though.

Somehow this reminds me of a scene from the Veggie Tales Christmas Special The Toy Who Saved Christmas.

1853309 Really? I better watch it then :rainbowlaugh: What did you think of the story?

1854354 Random and weird. I lol'd:rainbowlaugh:

1854513 "Random and weird" Just like me :yay:

1854519 It felt like a Wes Anderson movie. The visual of those three going down a hill at break neck speed screaming like girls is just too perfect.

1854519 This story is FUNNY!!! Will you make more funny stories?

4256032 I'm not sure, I'm having trouble coming up with writing and I really need to focus on my schoolwork. Maybe someday I will post new stories.

4256536 Oh ok. Hey want to check out my story Ace Combat: Divided Feelings?

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