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A frustrated writer who just wants people to like their stories.

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For centuries Celestia had been alone, with nopony to call as her family. But as she lived a life of hidden loneliness, she will soon find herself in the company of a young filly, one whom's she'll love and care for as if she were her own. Brought to her through an unfortunate accident, yet treated with love and gently care, Celestia, for the first time in hundreds and hundreds of years, finds herself loving another pony who is now family to her. For this young filly is now her daughter, and she her mother.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

:applecry: why did you take me on this feels trip why :raritycry:

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There, there, here's a tissue.

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thanks i needed that

Would like to see more please, and just wondering... what time era are we in?

OMG THE FEELS. WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO US???:fluttercry:

Prettt good so far, a few grammatical errors and misspelled words throughout, but no bad at all so far.

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Looks like you need a proof reader. I noticed several errors though not enough to throw off the reading. Let me know if you want help on that. I have proof read for others on the site before. :twilightsmile:

Nice to see this one has a new chapter after almost 2 years. Needs editing but the heart of the story is good. Keep it up.

ow ow ow poor silver

Been looking for this one to update for a while. :) I have been wondering though... what timeline are we in here? Seems to be during Luna's Banishment ... as no Luna has been mentioned... but could be later? Is Twilight a student of hers? Maybe Silver would like a playmate?
I suspect Silver will soon recognize that Sunflower was Celestia's friend, and understand the Princess is hurting too.

Hope to see more soon!

Great story so far. Added to my read list. :twilightsmile:

Totally forgotten about this story. Can’t wait to see more and glad to see a nice Blueblood. Poor Silver, I can see Blue being the “best friends” for her and being sure he doesn’t fall the same path like his family has been… also, why in the world would a certain group of ponies try to murder the Princess who is likely the only one to move the sun… they know it would be a terrible situation for the whole planet…

Also… a few mistakes

Sighing, Celestia soon shook her head. Whatever his character was, family [waa] family.

Giving him a soft look, Celestia then made a small smile, before deciding to engulf [her] in her magic and lift him up.

believe you met “him” since Celestia wasn’t picking herself up.

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Look a bug :pinkiegasp:

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Thanks for still reading the story, and double thanks for the corrections! :twilightsmile:

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I'm just wondering what the next chapter is going to be like with sliver wing and Celestia

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