I'm sorry but I can't read this fic any further seeing how it follows the same "I thought you were dead" & "enemies from wherever the protagonist comes from & fuck shit up" cliché when it comes to these types of fics. It's not bad this just isn't for me anymore.

It’s an ok story however I feel your adding too many numbers here with how ya keep adding more an more humans. I hope to see more but one calm down with that an two slow down Tis a bit fast paced. Anyways I do hope to see some more as it’s a fairly nice read overall.

11073220
Ya, no more, but honestly, I wrote myself in a corner, I have no idea what to do, why there's nothing new, I really don't know what to do with this. All endings at this point are stupid, wrote myself in a corner pretty much.

11073612
Lol slow clap good job mate. Perhaps a rewrite is in order? Could change it up slow it down an make it better overall.

11073706
Ya, but I'm committed to a new story I'm doing, much better than this story, actually know the ending to the new one, lost a lot of writing time while in bootcamp, but working again on new stuff. For now, this story is kinda done until I rewrite it later on.

11074410
Ah what’s this new story?

11074589
Halo meets Fallout Equestria.

11078452
Hmmm interesting. I’ll admit I ain’t a big fan of fallout Equestria but I’m alright with it. I enjoy the idea of people from fallout to Equestria better. Anyways good luck with it!

11078851
Thanks, know how to do military stuff better since joining the Navy, so it'll be good.