When the Wonderbolts find a strange purple cloud near Cloudsdale they decide to check it out, turns out it's a portal, a portal to a horrible place, but they pull something out and now it must figure out how to live its new life in Equestria.
After a minute to process the invite, he folded the paper up and placed it in his pocket, he was about to leave until he saw the feather, "Why the feather?" He picked up the feather and carefully put in into his backpack, he had questions that needed answers.
oooohhhhh I think I remember something about the feather thing, just forgot the deeper meaning.
"Dear Eli, another portal opened up near Manehattan, and the creatures you described as zombies started to come though, there's like fifty of them, maybe more, I need you to kill them before they get to that city. I'm trying to hold them off, but my shield won't last long. I'm sending a chariot.
Just saying, I hope they have some calm chapters to proceed in their romance or to get to know some people and that not everytime there has to be a fight between that.
Next one is, it's short, was going to continue this chapter, but decided to split it to keep it more coherent. But there's no action to it, I don't think? I forgot. Also remember, I wrote all but the final chapter before I published the first chapter, making huge changes would take months to do.
Eli jumped off the small ledge and got right next to the shield, he yelled, "Witness me princess! Witness!" He threw a punch at the closest zombie, the punch went right to it's face, it basically evaporated from the force of the punch, he just started punching every zombie he could.
oooohhhhh I think I remember something about the feather thing, just forgot the deeper meaning.
Just saying, I hope they have some calm chapters to proceed in their romance or to get to know some people and that not everytime there has to be a fight between that.
Next one is, it's short, was going to continue this chapter, but decided to split it to keep it more coherent. But there's no action to it, I don't think? I forgot.
Also remember, I wrote all but the final chapter before I published the first chapter, making huge changes would take months to do.
Mad Max thing lol
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I wrote that after watching Fury Road lol, so ya, I wanted to put that in.