When the Wonderbolts find a strange purple cloud near Cloudsdale they decide to check it out, turns out it's a portal, a portal to a horrible place, but they pull something out and now it must figure out how to live its new life in Equestria.
I'm not really getting that warm with the story somehow, I have nothing against those kind of stories, but somehow I think I have a little problem with it once in a while if the main chars try to hard and if it ends in some kind of boss rush. Well I still have to give you a chance I guess, you said you kind of changed the pasing a bit and it maybe is a bit to soon to see if it works out in a few chapters. I mean if it is going to look good till then and if you view the full package.
8806743 Most of my stories go with more of the talking route and less of the fighting route, but I wanted to branch out a bit and well, do something kind of different, this story was an experiment. One I'm not sure I'll really be repeating. But I'll try to finish up the story at least, and believe me, this was so much faster and SO much more of a boss rush than it is now.
I'm not really getting that warm with the story somehow, I have nothing against those kind of stories, but somehow I think I have a little problem with it once in a while if the main chars try to hard and if it ends in some kind of boss rush.
Well I still have to give you a chance I guess, you said you kind of changed the pasing a bit and it maybe is a bit to soon to see if it works out in a few chapters. I mean if it is going to look good till then and if you view the full package.
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Most of my stories go with more of the talking route and less of the fighting route, but I wanted to branch out a bit and well, do something kind of different, this story was an experiment. One I'm not sure I'll really be repeating. But I'll try to finish up the story at least, and believe me, this was so much faster and SO much more of a boss rush than it is now.