When the Wonderbolts find a strange purple cloud near Cloudsdale they decide to check it out, turns out it's a portal, a portal to a horrible place, but they pull something out and now it must figure out how to live its new life in Equestria.
8709771 " I don't wanna spoil anything, but I can tell you this, a relationship will come up, just needs to build, and become something big. And the sex tag is one I'm not sure of, I may publish a sex scene, but it isn't likely, unless it's extremely requested. I just don't wanna be known for that. Plus I wanna be careful, I have implication or light kissing, I'd rather have the tag than not have it and this story be taken down.
8710023 okay that's alright, I just prefer that type of romance or relationship when sex should be involved, but I'm prefectly fine with it not being there too.
"Because she had an ass that could kill, literally. She bent over once and an old man behind us stared at her behind before dying of a heart attack, do you know how I knew it was of her?" They nodded. "He had a boner." They were blushing so much.
I think I enjoy this so much, because for once they are the once that blush all the time and not him, that and he is apparently strong enough to defend himself instead of being kicked around or hiding somewhere.
Now I only hope that if he should chose more than one partner, that it makes sense and that the romance is believeable, otherwise I just continue enjoying it.
I hope you all like this, I have many chapters wrote already, but the story is not done. Let me know if this is good, there is a lot more to come, and I mean a LOT.
I won't lie, I like it when there is still a chance to say your opinion and maybe be the cause for little changes, but so far the story is pretty good. I just hope that he doesn'T tries so hard to be suggestive or badass like some of those soldier characters. I just mention it when I think it was a tad to much.
I like this more than I thought I would and get even slightly excited for more now. However take your time, it's better if I don't have to much to read at once.
8722206 That's okay, just not to much I guess, I had seen many soldiers and whatever who I just disliked because of how much of an asshole they were or super big badass/pervert.
Interessting, trough when there is sex I hope more it includes a romance and more meaningfull sex, it is just my taste in stories.
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I don't wanna spoil anything, but I can tell you this, a relationship will come up, just needs to build, and become something big. And the sex tag is one I'm not sure of, I may publish a sex scene, but it isn't likely, unless it's extremely requested. I just don't wanna be known for that. Plus I wanna be careful, I have implication or light kissing, I'd rather have the tag than not have it and this story be taken down.
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okay that's alright, I just prefer that type of romance or relationship when sex should be involved, but I'm prefectly fine with it not being there too.
I think I enjoy this so much, because for once they are the once that blush all the time and not him, that and he is apparently strong enough to defend himself instead of being kicked around or hiding somewhere.
Now I only hope that if he should chose more than one partner, that it makes sense and that the romance is believeable, otherwise I just continue enjoying it.
I won't lie, I like it when there is still a chance to say your opinion and maybe be the cause for little changes, but so far the story is pretty good. I just hope that he doesn'T tries so hard to be suggestive or badass like some of those soldier characters. I just mention it when I think it was a tad to much.
I like this more than I thought I would and get even slightly excited for more now. However take your time, it's better if I don't have to much to read at once.
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He'll be quite badass, but in a slightly comedic and way. He is the smasher after all.
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That's okay, just not to much I guess, I had seen many soldiers and whatever who I just disliked because of how much of an asshole they were or super big badass/pervert.
However I liked him here.
That's weird
The desert eagle bit got me. I hope he keeps that 😂