"If you sport Spitfire's feather, it'll be a sign you want something more intimate. If not, no worries, it'll just go at a slower pace. Thought you should know.

Sooo...if he shows her the feather or wears it, it means he wants to get laid as fast as possible and without it he wants to get to know her first?

Well with how he lived before and since he already had a child I guess it's okay, normally I would say get to know her first, not sure how much experience Spitfire already has, that and normally I just prefer it at a slower pace in stories.

She really does look good.

"Oh it's been more than that, I've only been with one girl, and she just wanted my answers for tests, one time we did it, and I had to stay with her for a horrible fucking year. She was the biggest bitch, I was so happy when I put a bullet into her zombie corpse."

He kind of seems easy to get if he just took the bait, or he got tricked by her. Well if that was his girlfriend then every chapter it starts to sounds more like he had less than a real relationship with her.

Anyway, if you all really like his and want the explicit, maybe I will, but I'm not sure if I want clop to be associated with my stories, I'm wanting to make stories, not porn, so maybe, let me know if it would be a good idea in the comments below. Thank you all for reading and hope you enjoyed, peace!

Hhhhhmmm if I'm honest I already said I normally like it slower in stories, just to make sure if feels right.
I don't want to sound like the guy that likes no fun, but I start to think that the whole pacing feels a bit fast/rushed.

For some reasons I just don't get the right feeling with this even if they kind of had a really nice date together. I guess I'm not even sure if that guy even knows what he really wants, he just goes with it.
What I mean is, somehow and I'm not sure how to really say this, it looks like he isn't taking this really seriously even if he kind of wants a real relationship.
Maybe I would think differently about it if I would take another look at the last chapter and then this but I rememebr enough.

Well I guess that being said I don't need to see the scene, not sure if I like it enough to continue so far if I'm honest. It is not bad, but I don't have anything special that keeps me here so far.

Maybe that's normal for a story like this, to feel fast I mean, but it feels like everything happens to fast for me and I'm talking about the fights and stuff this time.

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Well, I'm not going to spoil anything, but I took some of your advice and I found a point which I could slow them down, next chapter, no action, just a bit of dialogue. I think it'll be good, maybe help the story a bit.