• Member Since 23rd Nov, 2021
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Major Mane


Writing stories because I need a new hobby.

Comments ( 25 )

That "nightmare" is f****** stupid! Glad that Luna came by.

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Like stupid stupid or just stupid?

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The kind of stupid that reminds me of the terrible story adaptations from Wattpad, mainly the protagonist's parent/guardian being a total douchebag, just because of plot. Of course, that was just a nightmare, but still.

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I'll keep it in mind for the next few chapters and other stories.

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Also, what is with the "horse" insult?

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I was thinking like instead of calling a pony a whore, you call them a horse. Kinda like how they use buck instead of fuck.

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Oh yeah, I remember that ridiculous notion in other stories as well. I mean, it makes no sense? Because, didn't we see horses in the show as well? Ex: Saddle Arabia Horses?

How will that work??

The introduction is going way too fast but it has potential

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Yeah they follow the same BS sad origin story where they have a bad child hood or shitty work place. Also I really don't get how people are okay with the tyrant poking their heads in the MC memoires like a goddamn library

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I've been trying to work on that, might just leave this alone and do a oneshot.

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You think I should just skip any backstory for the characters and just leave a little more mysterious or just try and do it more subtly...
I'm still trying to figure it out.

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Agreed and second person is terrible for long form writing.

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First fic I've ever written (well really the first story I've ever written) but I'm learning from it so thanks for the heads up.

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I despise the ponies except the Earth ponies. I sympathize with the changelings before they 'reformed'. Parasyte must've change my perception of reality when I first watched it.

You should have it for human sweat it's like a mare magnet and stallions are considered weaker then mare so they have to be protected

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I was thinking about that but scratched it.

Pretty good for a first story. Needs some polish but I still would like to see where this is going.

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Thanks, it was about time I use my writing skills anyways! 😁

I guess nobody on fimfiction knows who T-pain and Akon is...

I'm either to old, or not old enough.

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I know who Akon is because I listened to the song he was featured in called I Just Had Sex.

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