Im sorry to see it end, but I do request that you leave it up. Even old stories deserve to be read.

You put a lot of work into your stories, Don't short change yourself or your writing by deleting your own hard work.

Like I generally tell people, even bad stories have a real gem or two buried in its pages and should be left published. And this story is a fairly good read. It should be left for others to enjoy.

Monk

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Yeah, I get that, only real issue I have is rereading it makes me wanna commit die.

An option is to also just rewrite it in the manner of your liking. You have a good storyline for this with a lot of good ideas in it.

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I'd been thinking about that. Hell, I've got something both similar and new in mind that I'm not too certain about yet.

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Sounds like a good plan, hope to see something soon!

Well, I thought I made a cleaning a year ago, I guess I missed this

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