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Togashi
Just a worn out writer from a bygone age. Don't mind me, I'm just passing through.
Togashi
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9741921
Thanks, completely forgot to add it.
New story hype
I like filly Vinyl finding her way into show business. She's innocent enough to be cute in her inexperience, but also lewd enough for quality porn.
Hiatus is a huge dick. I don't like him and I'm glad he got beaten. I gear there will be more of him in the future, I'll be curious to see where he ends up. He's making me re-evaluate Treble. That pony didn't make a first impression as a likeable character, but at least he stopped at mean words. He's another one whose future interests me.
This human's holding something. He's way too smooth to not have some dark secret from his past. Elegie has tought me not to be too optimistic. We shall see.
I've just now noticed your reply on my comment on your announcement blog. I agree, Elegie has a finale that wraps up nicely all loose ends. This story doesn't seem related, but TaviScratch is still TaviScratch
I cheated to find the song but wen you find it, its a good song.
Story is great so far to.
9742056
I love writing Tavi and Vinyl, whether it's just interaction together or clop. I think they are one of the best dynamic couples from the fandom.
Still not sure if there will be clop of the two in this story. We'll leave that as a surprise.
0 to 100 real quick
But still love the story man.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
This story looks interesting, but I felt I should check first...
By filly, do you mean underage? I feel a bit uncomfortable reading that, so I'll wait for your reply.
9743298
She has her butt tattoo but is presented to be young. She is written as a street smart pony and certainly not innocent or naive. Definitely older than the CMC for instance.
So take that as you will. I never have applied a general age of consent to the Equestria universe, personally.
I also didn't add this to any foalcon groups because I dont feel like it fits.
That a typo or intended frozen-pony speech?
9742066
What was the song?
9743535
Typo
Thanks. I swear I caught that same error in another draft but it still somehow found its way in there.
I got fuckin logan fatherly badass bond vibe goin on
this fic is getting good, I can't wait to see more of it
Oof, that was rough at the end. Poor Vinyl.
no opening quote for the dialogue
Holy moley! That Hiatus guy needs to experience a gelding, fast. Thankfully currently-anonymous human to the rescue!
No closing quotation.
Vinyl
No opening quote.
But this just happened a little ways up
Also, feeling a bit conflicted? Like just that Hiatus cops a feel and tries to sex her up and it's bad. This guy cops a feel and she melts at him.
Like, I get he saved her and is being nice, but it feels like a front and then he takes her to his house not 24 hours later and get down to business.
Any more cynical and you could think he set the whole thing up with Hiatus. I mean he's one "-pin" away from bw5ing named for it.
Anywhozits. Definitely still reading and liking, it's just making me think a bit I suppose.
9744234
Thanks, got these fixed.
9744227
Thanks corrected
9744243
No problem! Also if I'm being too annoying with these, I can PM you them instead in the future
9744239
Sure. I think maybe changing that 'It' to 'Today' clarifies that conversation better, as it's referencing the short time they spent at the cafe.
9744257
Sounds good to me 👍
Haven't read this story yet but the description has my interest so I will be reading it soon but thought I should mention that it seems to be missing the Human tag.
9744304
Oh didn't know we had a human tag! I will add it.
Great story so far, but there's one thing that confuses me. Vinyl is said to be a filly, making me think of cmc age, but how she interacts and is treated makes me think more mid or late teens.
9744963
I would say teenage is about accurate.
The CMC for me are barely above 'foal' age, just by virtue of their marks. Although their animation in the show still very much mimics other foals, and I don't have an issue with people writing them as foals even with the marks.
It's hard to classify 'filly' age because there just aren't many teenage ponies in the show. For me, 'filly' age is more in line with the flashbacks we got of Cadance and Big Mac: (SFW)
Mac
Cadance
9745147
Thanks for the clarification. I'm just too used to writers using filly as another term for foal and yearling for teenagers in general. Pretty sure, filly and colt supposed to be meant for any Male or female of youth, like boy and girl.
Can't wait to see how this story spans out!
Moar.
9746517
I should have the next chapter finished tomorrow night. I have a rough plot line I am following but I'm always changing things as I write through the story.
I like the concept of the story and I'll be paying attention to it.
I thought it was a bit weird how Vinyl cozied up to the human. She just got out of a bad situation and now in a different one. Maybe it's because the human is paying attention to what Vinyl wants, and isnt being creepy.
I don't know how I'm supposed to feel about this?
9748848
Yeah unexpected shot to the feels in this chapter.
The feels
I suppose it's good to see Tavi caring for her friend (love), even though I can't shake off the thought she may have ulterior motives.
Vinyl looks surprisingly ok from what happened yesterday. If the stage can help her get over it, all the best for her
9749112
No I agree to a point. I was worried about it feeling rushed as well but with the sudden traumatic events it felt fine. This is just King taking advantage of her.
I also think it will feel more in line as we see more of Vinyls past and where she is at right now emotionally.
I knew the song this time, its Ken Ashcorp Absolute territory and if im right it The Living Tombstone remix
Is the cover art in any way related to the story? For whatever reason, it's what drew me towards reading it. All in all, great chapter. It deftly showcases the ins and outs of Vinyl's mind.
Ehh... Just ehh is all I can really say. The whole "fillys and colts" theme is just shutting down any real interest I have with this. It's like I really don't know whats going on.
9755721
Yes, it definitely is. Just going slowly for now with the plot.
I'm getting a 50 shades of gray from this story. Really dont know why. But good story though, hopefully more will come.
9768606
Definitely, but that's just based on what I've heard about 50 Shades. I've never read or seen it.
Regardless, I'm intrigued by this story. There is definitely some underlying story here that hasn't come to the forefront yet..
9768606
9770405
I haven't read or watched the book or movie, but I would generally agree. My original thought was to push that plot device further to more extremes. We just havent gotten there in the story line yet.
9771095
Same here, its mostly for women's entertainment *shrugs* but we all know how it goes. Girl meets guy. The only way to get a place to live free or some other nonsense is to get something stick up your arse and dress you up like a leprechaun. The usual common story. But your story kind of has that vibe. Nothing wrong with it anyway or form. Please send more chapters, I'm reading really questionable stories.
Now the real question, was it really all just a wet dream?
-inception intensifies-
Update?
Is this history dead??
Tracked this story months back and I barely started reading it. It was a good read and hopefully it gets updated in the future. So until then, I wish you good luck.
Man rescues mare from rape, sexual assaults her the next day, but she’s cool with it because he’s a Nice Guy.
Yikes.