Kicked out of her house, a young Vinyl Scratch finds herself alone on the streets of Manehattan. During a chance encounter, she meets a new creature, a 'human'. She finds a new home and a way forward with him, but what will be the cost?
I like filly Vinyl finding her way into show business. She's innocent enough to be cute in her inexperience, but also lewd enough for quality porn.
Hiatus is a huge dick. I don't like him and I'm glad he got beaten. I gear there will be more of him in the future, I'll be curious to see where he ends up. He's making me re-evaluate Treble. That pony didn't make a first impression as a likeable character, but at least he stopped at mean words. He's another one whose future interests me.
This human's holding something. He's way too smooth to not have some dark secret from his past. Elegie has tought me not to be too optimistic. We shall see.
I've just now noticed your reply on my comment on your announcement blog. I agree, Elegie has a finale that wraps up nicely all loose ends. This story doesn't seem related, but TaviScratch is still TaviScratch
9742056 I love writing Tavi and Vinyl, whether it's just interaction together or clop. I think they are one of the best dynamic couples from the fandom.
Still not sure if there will be clop of the two in this story. We'll leave that as a surprise.
This story looks interesting, but I felt I should check first... By filly, do you mean underage? I feel a bit uncomfortable reading that, so I'll wait for your reply.
9743298 She has her butt tattoo but is presented to be young. She is written as a street smart pony and certainly not innocent or naive. Definitely older than the CMC for instance.
So take that as you will. I never have applied a general age of consent to the Equestria universe, personally.
I also didn't add this to any foalcon groups because I dont feel like it fits.
9744239 Sure. I think maybe changing that 'It' to 'Today' clarifies that conversation better, as it's referencing the short time they spent at the cafe.
Haven't read this story yet but the description has my interest so I will be reading it soon but thought I should mention that it seems to be missing the Human tag.
Great story so far, but there's one thing that confuses me. Vinyl is said to be a filly, making me think of cmc age, but how she interacts and is treated makes me think more mid or late teens.
The CMC for me are barely above 'foal' age, just by virtue of their marks. Although their animation in the show still very much mimics other foals, and I don't have an issue with people writing them as foals even with the marks.
It's hard to classify 'filly' age because there just aren't many teenage ponies in the show. For me, 'filly' age is more in line with the flashbacks we got of Cadance and Big Mac: (SFW) Mac Cadance
9745147 Thanks for the clarification. I'm just too used to writers using filly as another term for foal and yearling for teenagers in general. Pretty sure, filly and colt supposed to be meant for any Male or female of youth, like boy and girl. Can't wait to see how this story spans out!
9746517 I should have the next chapter finished tomorrow night. I have a rough plot line I am following but I'm always changing things as I write through the story.
I like the concept of the story and I'll be paying attention to it.
I thought it was a bit weird how Vinyl cozied up to the human. She just got out of a bad situation and now in a different one. Maybe it's because the human is paying attention to what Vinyl wants, and isnt being creepy.
9749112 No I agree to a point. I was worried about it feeling rushed as well but with the sudden traumatic events it felt fine. This is just King taking advantage of her.
I also think it will feel more in line as we see more of Vinyls past and where she is at right now emotionally.
Coverart sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/spittfireart/art/Vinyl-Scratch-Vent-Art-312051388 (SFW)
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Thanks, completely forgot to add it.
New story hype
I like filly Vinyl finding her way into show business. She's innocent enough to be cute in her inexperience, but also lewd enough for quality porn.
Hiatus is a huge dick. I don't like him and I'm glad he got beaten. I gear there will be more of him in the future, I'll be curious to see where he ends up. He's making me re-evaluate Treble. That pony didn't make a first impression as a likeable character, but at least he stopped at mean words. He's another one whose future interests me.
This human's holding something. He's way too smooth to not have some dark secret from his past. Elegie has tought me not to be too optimistic. We shall see.
I've just now noticed your reply on my comment on your announcement blog. I agree, Elegie has a finale that wraps up nicely all loose ends. This story doesn't seem related, but TaviScratch is still TaviScratch
9742056
I love writing Tavi and Vinyl, whether it's just interaction together or clop. I think they are one of the best dynamic couples from the fandom.
Still not sure if there will be clop of the two in this story. We'll leave that as a surprise.
0 to 100 real quick
But still love the story man.
Great story. Looking forward to more.
This story looks interesting, but I felt I should check first...
By filly, do you mean underage? I feel a bit uncomfortable reading that, so I'll wait for your reply.
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She has her butt tattoo but is presented to be young. She is written as a street smart pony and certainly not innocent or naive. Definitely older than the CMC for instance.
So take that as you will. I never have applied a general age of consent to the Equestria universe, personally.
I also didn't add this to any foalcon groups because I dont feel like it fits.
this fic is getting good, I can't wait to see more of it
But this just happened a little ways up
Also, feeling a bit conflicted? Like just that Hiatus cops a feel and tries to sex her up and it's bad. This guy cops a feel and she melts at him.
Like, I get he saved her and is being nice, but it feels like a front and then he takes her to his house not 24 hours later and get down to business.
Any more cynical and you could think he set the whole thing up with Hiatus. I mean he's one "-pin" away from bw5ing named for it.
Anywhozits. Definitely still reading and liking, it's just making me think a bit I suppose.
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No problem! Also if I'm being too annoying with these, I can PM you them instead in the future
9744239
Sure. I think maybe changing that 'It' to 'Today' clarifies that conversation better, as it's referencing the short time they spent at the cafe.
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Sounds good to me 👍
Haven't read this story yet but the description has my interest so I will be reading it soon but thought I should mention that it seems to be missing the Human tag.
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Oh didn't know we had a human tag! I will add it.
Great story so far, but there's one thing that confuses me. Vinyl is said to be a filly, making me think of cmc age, but how she interacts and is treated makes me think more mid or late teens.
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I would say teenage is about accurate.
The CMC for me are barely above 'foal' age, just by virtue of their marks. Although their animation in the show still very much mimics other foals, and I don't have an issue with people writing them as foals even with the marks.
It's hard to classify 'filly' age because there just aren't many teenage ponies in the show. For me, 'filly' age is more in line with the flashbacks we got of Cadance and Big Mac: (SFW)
Mac
Cadance
9745147
Thanks for the clarification. I'm just too used to writers using filly as another term for foal and yearling for teenagers in general. Pretty sure, filly and colt supposed to be meant for any Male or female of youth, like boy and girl.
Can't wait to see how this story spans out!
Moar.
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I should have the next chapter finished tomorrow night. I have a rough plot line I am following but I'm always changing things as I write through the story.
I like the concept of the story and I'll be paying attention to it.
I thought it was a bit weird how Vinyl cozied up to the human. She just got out of a bad situation and now in a different one. Maybe it's because the human is paying attention to what Vinyl wants, and isnt being creepy.
9749112
No I agree to a point. I was worried about it feeling rushed as well but with the sudden traumatic events it felt fine. This is just King taking advantage of her.
I also think it will feel more in line as we see more of Vinyls past and where she is at right now emotionally.
Man rescues mare from rape, sexual assaults her the next day, but she’s cool with it because he’s a Nice Guy.
Yikes.