I'm getting a 50 shades of gray from this story. Really dont know why. But good story though, hopefully more will come.

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Definitely, but that's just based on what I've heard about 50 Shades. I've never read or seen it.
Regardless, I'm intrigued by this story. There is definitely some underlying story here that hasn't come to the forefront yet..

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9770405
I haven't read or watched the book or movie, but I would generally agree. My original thought was to push that plot device further to more extremes. We just havent gotten there in the story line yet.

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Same here, its mostly for women's entertainment *shrugs* but we all know how it goes. Girl meets guy. The only way to get a place to live free or some other nonsense is to get something stick up your arse and dress you up like a leprechaun. The usual common story. But your story kind of has that vibe. Nothing wrong with it anyway or form. Please send more chapters, I'm reading really questionable stories.

Update?

Is this history dead??

Tracked this story months back and I barely started reading it. It was a good read and hopefully it gets updated in the future. So until then, I wish you good luck.