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Omegathyst


Writer of nearly every type of story under the sun! Proud furry female author! Commissions CLOSED for the time being :)

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Haven't read this and I don't plan to, however, I was just watching a How To Train Your Dragon snippet of the third movie today. How Coincide.

JD1

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Then why bother saying anything!!!

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Because it was very important for all of us to know that they watched a snippet of a HTTYD movie, I guess 😂😂😂

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I found it funny that I watched HTTYD on youtube, opened up a tab on fimfic, and the first thing I see on the front page is a story titled HTTYD. It's like I can never get away from it.

Pretty great story. Hope we can see more chapters!

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Honestly I'll probably have the next one done tomorrow 🍰

Edit: This week LOL

Downvote for not including the gruesome demise of Hiccup at Toothless's Hands. A true M rated How to Train Your Dragon would have gone that route...

Just kidding, take a free upvote for making me laugh with that title.

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I'm unironically only interested in this for the inevitable drama thats going to unfold.

Really like the way both Spike and Cup Cake badmouth her husband. Nice chapter!

I eagerly vote for Mrs. Cake to get knocked up!

I too hope he breeds her with his bastard.

I do love Mrs Cake power-bottoming Spike through this. I know she's not in the tags, but will we ever see Spike using this more aggressive attitude with Sweetie? Can't help but think that after a few days of having Spike pounding her into the headboard she'd welcome an open relationship just to stop walking funny.

Ooh, Cup Cake you bitch. You've come to hate your husband for not pleasing you and you're going to gaslight Spike into feeling the same way about Sweetie so he can be your full time side-peice. I can't wait to see how things turn out.

Comment posted by noncommittal brony deleted May 30th, 2024

When is the next chapter coming ?

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That's a great question, there'll be three more chapters coming in at least 2-3 months because I have other commissions before continuing this one. Rest assured, they will be out soon enough 😄

Gonna be honest, while still good work, Smolder did it better.

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I'm not even going to pretend that Smolder isn't my favorite MLP character. Smolder Superiority ✊

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There ain't enough stories for her, that don't put her in the dom position anyway.

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There are more chapters coming out, and another out now. Hope you enjoy 🐲🎂

It’s always great to read a new anal scene from you. Mrs. Cake hiding in the luggage and sticking her ass in the air was an especially hot moment! :twilightblush:

Nice too see the series back! Pretty good chapter.

Are there going to be any facesitting in this story?

“Thank you, dear,” Mrs. Cake smiled as she littered on the floor by tossing the empty container of plastic. The degenerate.

You got me good with that one. :rainbowlaugh:

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I felt suddenly inclined to add a line of pure comedy in this otherwise serious drama. Just all the terrible cheating and I felt like the narrator wanted to shame her over the littering and not anything else 😂

Mrs Cake being at the center of Spike’s board means he will claim more mares for himself? Pretty good chapter btw

Comment posted by Captain Marvelous deleted Nov 14th, 2024

I REALLY REALLY hope that Sweetie Belle was cheating on Spike with that male student and with her just using Spike as eye-candy and emotional support for own selfish desires. That way Spike really has no reason to feel guilty about cheating on her and he can spin the story to make it look like he was “always” been faithful while Sweetie is the cheating unfaithful harlot to his friends and family. Making her think that she really is a terrible pony.

I just want to see Sweetie Belle go through some serious emotional suffering.

Comment posted by MilesTheOnePiece deleted Nov 11th, 2024

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Sorry I had to delete the other responses, didn't want a duplicate review on this story or an unrelated one on Options. But I appreciate your enthusiasm!

To answer your review, that scene is intended to be Spike making up something happening that wasn't happening to justify his cheating with Mrs. Cake. If he could pretend that Sweetie Belle is emotionally cheating on him, it removes him of the guilt. I don't think the commissioner wants to take the story in that direction, however, they do plan on there being more Sweetie Belle's emotional suffering just in a different way. Thank you for your review and I appreciate how much you enjoy the story!

Is the next chapter coming soon ?

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I really hope that later on in the story, that Sweetie Belle has been cheating on Spike with that male Student of hers and that Carrot Cake was cheating on Cup Cake with some mare, along before Spike and Cup Cale had started. That way the pair can claim that they comfort and solace in another one for the shared pain of heartbreak, then they can say it led them to to eventually having sex and then catching feelings for one another. These would also allow for Cup Cake to kick Carrot Cake out and have Spike move in and the two can now openly love each other while everyone in Ponyville will see them as victims of infidelity.


Please come back and finish this story

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Oh sorry I see that you actually saw my previous comments, so please just ignore this latest one.


Sorry for bothering you

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Ok I understand now, that makes perfect sense to me

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I'll be updating this story before the end of this month, unless I get sick again like last December, but hopefully I will remain in the best of health! 🐲

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That's a pretty good summary of this chapter!

Id still say its Mr. Cake's fault for neglecting his wife for so long that she felt like she had to do something about it. If Mr. Cake actually cared about her he would've done more to show that he loved her instead of ignoring or neglecting her need for affection and love. To me this feels justified

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Isn’t that what a cheater or enabler would say in reaction to their cheating, rather than the one who gets cheated on? Am I the only one who caught the NTR trope of not seeing the betrayed’s side of this conflict?

I hope this story doesn’t go the typical NTR route. No one likes to be betrayed. No one likes to be abandoned. No one likes to have their family torn apart and no one likes a story where the bad guy wins. And please remember that Spike and Cup Cake are the bad guys in this story. I hope there’s at least some semblance of karma against them before the story’s end…

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Uhhhhhh, I like stories where the bad guy wins. It's a lot more creative and interesting than ones that follow the same formula. If you don't like them then your preferences are very understandable, but I have a disclaimer on here that this particular story leans more into the awfulness of cheating. The disclaimer is there for a reason, please don't read if this isn't something you want to read. Find a story you actually like, I promise I won't be offended.

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