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Is that a Motha Fuckin Jojo Reflerence?!
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famous last words to ever have been said to a scientist that is a little off their rocker
“Okay Okay Twilight, fine. Study away”
That poor soul has no clue what he has just got himself into.
slow your roll there Casanova you just got here and already your hitting on the sun goddess (this is just a joke not an actual criticism please disregard it in taking comments seriously)
Started reading, saw the protag was called anon, stopped reading.
I appreciate the feedback
Your grammar could use a little work. Looking forward to seeing how in depth this examination will be and if Twilight can act as professionally as possible.
I feel like your rushing into things a little too early in this story and i do suggest slowing things down a bit but overall its still decent for a first story
Tactical please continue inbound
God please; how many fimfictions of Humans having sex with ponies that are in progress!!!! This is my second one found!!!!
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Uh thanks? 😁
Pacing my dude pacing, you need to slow down. Things are happening to fast and you aren't describing them.
Plz slow gthe pacing of the story down a bit. I mean at first you make Anon blush at Twilight, then be in love with Celestia, then basically fully in love with twilight?
Who is Anon really in love with?
How about save the AnonxCelestia for a new story and slow the pace down, ok!!!