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nice work.
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The requester was specific in he wanted something really dark and messed up.
You will probably be one of the few who think so.
Wtf! People are actually into this kind of stuff?
I've probably seen worse...
Hmm... It doesn't beat out a guy getting his insides ground up, his dick bit off, his arms and legs lopped off, and kept alive and served as an incubator, but it's still cringeworthy. Congrats.
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I'm just as shocked as you are.
How is this not a punishment? And is a dildo still a dildo after it's been broken (presumably shattered, if it's glass)? How is it held together?
8089495 O, I get the fact that people have different interests, and that this is a torture porn story, but a broken glass dildo on a drill? Ow, that's gotta hurt!
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Broken as in snapped in half rather than shattered. I was only given a thousand words to work with so I had to be vague here and there.
Meh...Ok, I guess. Good writing, terrible premise, this is why I don't take requests/commissions
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8089519 If you think this is good writing, you have very low standards.
Not bad for a 1k word fic. Had it been a longer fic there would be so much more potential. And it could be oh so much darker ;) also Crazy pinkie in that cover art is gorgeous.
8089940 to each its own, i guess. but, well, i guess writing is the wrong word, Grammar would be better, no glaring mistakes as far as i could tell, but then again, i wasn't paying much attention to that.
The writing was really good! Torture and gore aren't really my thing, but you definitely nailed the horrific atmosphere with the gut-wrenching details! The characters reacted like I imagine they would if Pinkie's notorious alter ego was a murdering psychopath along with Adagio being defiant to the end. I think it was more like watching a horror film than a porno, so either way good job! :)
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*reads 3th to last paragraph* I was warn!
*finish* ouch!
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Thanks, most people don't read the Warnings.
It kind of leaves me wanting more to be honest.