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Incest is wincest
Interesting reading, I like when the couples are portrait it in a mature way (as being able to feel and express their sexuality
As for the other part of the fic it was interesting, a nice pace and setting.
8073973 Thanks. Nice to get good compliments on my first proper fic :)
Nice work on your first fic.
8074337 Thanks!
Amen to that!
This is probably my favorite incest pairing! We need more incest stories featuring Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and their parents! 
Amazing 1000\10
Okay, this was hot.
This would not be at the forefront of Rarity's mind.
Little anatomy glitch here:
Female bodies don't have prostates.
With that out of the way, though, this is a decent clopfic. The characterization is on point, that's always good.
My one criticism of this is the AppleDash stuff in the beginning.
It's not because I ship SoarinDash, but more because it just felt kind of tacked on.
The rest of the fic managed to be pretty adorable.
And that's the second time today I've found myself describing an incest RariBelle fic to be adorable. And I'm still just as surprised as I was the first time.
If this is well done, you'll get my like. We shall see.
Thanks for the compliments everypony. This may motivate me to either write something else or a follow up to this. And yes, I know females don't have a prostate. It's artistic licence. Sweetie just has, something, up there to give her more pleasure when her first time with Rarity is something she's never tried before. Maybe a sensitive haemorrhoidal plexus...
This was... very nice actually.
I don't advertise this, but this is a ship I support, but not a lot of people can make this ship tasteful. You did just that. Neither one of them seemed sick or anything. It was just two sisters who have a strong love for one another.
If you don't mind me asking, how old do you think Sweetie Belle is in this? I'm just curious is all.
8085905 Thanks for the compliments. I'm not sure on the age of Sweetie Belle really, it's hard to convert between Equestrian and human ages. I just see them as maturing mentally earlier and, once a pony has found their cutie mark, then they already know their place in society so I would consider the age of consent to be around the average age this happens.
this was magnificent!
I'm seeing quite a bit of punctuation errors in this story. Look up how direct addresses work in dialog, you're supposed to put a comma before the address. Or else you might get a situation like "let's eat grandma!", which can be read as cannibalism.
8081203
What was the other one?
8082137
I'd like to see a follow-up to this, particularly Applejack and Rainbow Dash's first times with their sisters, and maybe a sequel where all six get together to have an orgy with their sisters and one another.
8087897 This one: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/138028/native-belle
8087910 Ah, I like that one too!
8087897
Now that's a good idea. Thanks. I'll have to start thinking about that.
8088556 You're welcome. I'd like to see some Sweetie Belle X Applejack and Apple Bloom X Rarity action! And the Crusaders can have some fun with each other, same goes for the older sisters!
I agree, I wouldn't mind seeing more along these lines. Maybe even an orgy involving all six (AJ,RD,Rarity,Applebloom,Scootaloo & Sweetie bell)??
Keep the sexy times cummin'
Great story 10/10
this was a good story wish you write more
8089331
Late answer, but i wanted to say that we think the same, i thought (in fact) about Sweetie Belle making love to Applejack in a really romantic way.
11410708 Love this idea!
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I thoought like...
"-... Apple Bloom, ready?
-Ahm ready.
Both fillies looked to each other over her shoulders and suddenly swapped. Now Sweetie Belle was over Applejack and vice versa.
-E-Eh?! Ho-hold on there, S-Sugarcube!
-Mmmm no i won't.
Sweetie Belle said with a giggle, starting to kiss softly and passionately the neck of the cowgirl.
-I wanted this so bad, now i'm not gonna go back."
l o l.