• Member Since 18th Feb, 2017
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Alexshy


A nerd, system administrator and gamer. In for TR and Skyrim... ahh... yes, almost forgot - team Fluttershy... umm... if that's OK with you.

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gotta say not bad for first time in english, I did not see many mistakes.....not that i care though i read for clop mostly but every now and again i pay attention and...gotta say this is pretty good considering. short but decent enough for the first thumbs up. :raritywink:

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Thanks. I wasn't sure if I could get deeper into details without risk of the story being disapproved.

@ Everypony: Feel free to point to the mistakes you spot, so I could correct them.

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