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This is too perfect. Funny and adorable.
Damn, and I thought I was going deep with the tickle story I made. But I gotta say, this one definitely goes further and more detailed with the concept! Of course, I guess it helps that you definitely have stronger feelings about this kink than I do.
With that being said, this was surprisingly hot, despite not being a fan of tickling myself. The progression of events in relation to Caramel's reaction is really intriguing, and the chemistry between him and Mac feels really natural as the story progresses. The only qualm I have is how it ended so soon, but I have a feeling you purposely did that to edge your readers. And if that's the case I applaud you, you dirty little troll.
Overall, this is a really good tickle fic, and you should be proud of making something so enjoyable and sweet that's also rather sensual and dirty. Bravo!
This was a good read
The best part of this, is how beleaveable it is that, that is Big Mac, the character you made was Very good.
Noooo, don't end the fic like that! Stormy, why?
Anyway, like I just told VClaw, you and him seem to have commandeered the CaraMac ship. And I love where you're steering it. I, too, don't consider myself a tickling fan, but my goodness... You and V'll make me a fan at this rate!
9/10, would confuse and excite poor Caramel again.